The Villainous Adventures of Stone-Fist Smackdown!
By
Frosty_Femme,
Posted on: 2007-05-25 21:25 in Multi-Media Fan Creations
I like it. I'm pretty critical of grammar, spelling and seeing conversational writing in appropriate places. Most amateur comic books/strips fail in that regard. Yours does not and for that I commend you. I also like the use of in-game emotes. You've managed, in only three pages, to show us exactly what kind of person your character is, and he is interesting. I'm looking forward to more.
your = Belonging to you.
you're = Contraction meaning "You are."
Ur = The name of an ancient Mesopotamian city.
ur = This is not a word.
*bump* added pages 4, 5, and 6.
added pages 7, 8, and 9. Enjoy!
added pages 10, 11, and 12!
Remember guys, I want criticism, feel free to comment about my comic.
I have finally decided to make a City of Villains comic on my main villain, Stone-Fist Smasher, but I renamed him to Stone-Fist Smackdown (sounds better), right now I only have a small, comic strip, but I am putting it up here to get criticism and reviews. I will update it with more comic pages as I continue to make them. Please leave any reviews/criticism!
(Note: This is not a super-serious comic strip, it is meant to be taken lightly and somewhat humorously.)
(Another Note: If any one you have any ideas for the comic, make a villain on the server Pinnacle and send a tell to Stone-Fist Smasher, I'm always open to suggestions!)
The Villainous Adventures of Stone-Fist Smackdown
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