The Expendables Long Unawaited Issue Two

After a few months of putting things off, here is the second issue.

The Expendables Issue One (I hear it's funny!)

Page One/Cover

Page Two

Page Three

Page Four

Page Five

Page Six

Page Seven

Page Eight

Page Nine

Page Ten

Page Eleven

Page Twelve

Page Thirteen

Page Fourteen

This has a very Spark-Esq feel to it. In the sense that it is bazaar and funny. I really like how when you aren't showing a hero (ala landscape and the like) you switch the look to a very comic booky style.

Best. Sound. Effects. Ever.

"Snap! Crackle! Dislocate!"

The story kind of peters out, like it was hijacked by some other writer halfway through. I'm looking forward to see what happens, though.

Couple of spelling mistakes near the end. "Henchman" instead of "henchmen" on 12, "Fualtline" instead of "Faultline" on 13.

Ironik, I believe you mean the best sound effect ever is...

"Ben Affleck!"

Dude, I didn't want to spoil it.

Sheesh.

Thanks for the comments!

I noticed the Faultline error when I was uploading it. But, since I'm lazy, I went ahead with it. I'll make a joke out of it somehow. Also, the part where the storyline gets hi-jacked is most likely when I stopped making the comic for about three months. Luckily, I've got a better, more coherent idea in my head now that I got City of Heroes back on my Computer. It took a me a day to remember how to edit the demos again. So, in short, I'm back on the horse and expect more.

Ah, that explains it -- essentially it was a different writer. I'm not crazy!

Thanks for the words. Issue three is still in progress.

Has anyone else tried sending comics to COHCOMICS.COM? I sent in the first issue about 4 months ago, and it still isn't up. The cover was used for their hundredth comic thing, but no mention of the comic. Huh.

I would suggest talking to Sparky about that. He uses them alot and his one of their huge draws so he may know what is up.