Practice, practice, practice!
*clapedy clap clap* That's very good. I don't see anything you messed up on...
His neck is too long, where his face is in comparance to his head, his right hand.... Etc.
looks pretty durn good...agreed on the neck though, a wee bit long.~
...the sword is truth...
~whiteperegrine~
missing shoelaces on his left foot....
all in all though it's pretty good. I really like your style!
I'm drawing Sanctum characters 'til I drop! @.@
I don't particularly like this one, I think a few things are messed up.