Nice, Gnome, I didn't know you drew! 
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Nice, Gnome, I didn't know you drew!
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Oh, I do. I just dont have much time to do it very often 
I'd say your off to a good start here! (though I didn't know gnomes had such broad shoulders 
). The nice bold lines are great to look at as well.
As for areas to work on, you need to work on your center line. On his head, it looks as though his beard is out of alignment and should be moved to the left by about 3/4 the length of half his mustache. The divide of his shirt should also be moved over by the same amount to match up with his crotch.
In the future, it looks like you might want to work a bit on putting down the basic frame work of the character with guidelines and simple shapes to make sure that when you start putting on all the clothing and accessories and what-not, it all fits right on the body and lines up 
Still, great start there! Hope I've been of some help as well.
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I'd say your off to a good start here! (though I didn't know gnomes had such broad shoulders ). The nice bold lines are great to look at as well.
As for areas to work on, you need to work on your center line. On his head, it looks as though his beard is out of alignment and should be moved to the left by about 3/4 the length of half his mustache. The divide of his shirt should also be moved over by the same amount to match up with his crotch.
In the future, it looks like you might want to work a bit on putting down the basic frame work of the character with guidelines and simple shapes to make sure that when you start putting on all the clothing and accessories and what-not, it all fits right on the body and lines up
Still, great start there! Hope I've been of some help as well.
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Thanks Graver 
When I go back and fix this, I'll be sure to keep what you said in mind!
Keep in mind, this isnt finished. And, ignore the shading. I was messing around, trying out different styles. Depending on how much I like the finished product, I may make a group shot of some people. Anyway, please leave criticism. Enjoy!
Enforcer Gnome
This was made (loosely) based around a modified DC template.