Exosteel Unmasked WIP

A little WIP for myself. Cuz I like to do art.

Exosteel: Unmasked

Tell me what you think! Seriously, please. I'd really like critiques on this since I really am liking the way it's turning out.

Wow. That's really good. My only critique is (I had to stare at it for a while to find one ) is his metal arm thing. It looks a bit like the metal part is overlapping the chest, and it doesn't look like it's supposed to be. I would make it more apparent that the chest is in FRONT of the metal arm. It's really small, just like the line at the edge of his chest.




Sorry I couldn't think of a more productive critique...

Thanks Derek, I'll look to that.

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A little WIP for myself. Cuz I like to do art.

Exosteel: Unmasked

Tell me what you think! Seriously, please. I'd really like critiques on this since I really am liking the way it's turning out.

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wow, that looks really good. it looks so...real. theres nothing to fix as far as i can see. keep posting.

-Spade

looks good Serengeti

if I was to throw a critique out....it would be in regards to the shirt. lose a lil definition. looks like he's topless to me...but the collar line says otherwise... just thought. ~

S'a good point, WP. Probably the nipples and ribs are a little much, eh?

Can I say nipples without being Mod'ed?

Lets find out...

heh yup...you can...

in regards to the definition I mentioned...you can have it...just needs to be muted if you do.~

Um, I feel kinda bad to keep bringing this thread up, but in light of the excellent post just made by Greymist, I guess I am "/advanced critiques welcome"ing this piece.

Ooo I think that looks really good!! I like the angle of the chin and the length of the neck a lot.

Personally I kind of like the nipples (c'mon, everyone's got 'em) but I think they might be too far out on the side of each peck. Maybe move them inwards a tad bit.