Spread your wings and FLY Gryphon Girl!


Cuppa_LLX

 

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I'm curently rendering the 3rd frame of a one page comic one shot of my Griphon Girl and her Liquid Armor taking flight to fight some Ogres (off screen) on a city street. As soon as its done i'll psot a linky for you all to enjoy and cretique so give me about 30 mins.


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-Positron 06/07/06 07:27 PM

 

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The main character is dark and kinda hard to see - possibly due to the white backgrounds. I'd recommend dropping a sky of some sort back there to add interest.


 

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ya maybe ill also change the global lighting good thing i saved Each frame as a seperate file


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-Positron 06/07/06 07:27 PM

 

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Recheck the link Frame one updated
Re rendering frame 2

frame 1 changes: Sky added, camera angel zoom, brighter lights
frame 2 changes: Camera change, sky added, diving of griff pose changed, brighter lights


AE # 67087: Journey through the Looking Glass - Save the World
LLX VirtueVerse! - Check out my crazy Toons
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-Positron 06/07/06 07:27 PM

 

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Frame 2 updated, working on frame 3


AE # 67087: Journey through the Looking Glass - Save the World
LLX VirtueVerse! - Check out my crazy Toons
This is the size of group that we have balanced AVs for, 6.
-Positron 06/07/06 07:27 PM

 

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Frame 3 update: Lighting, camera position/zoom, Pose


AE # 67087: Journey through the Looking Glass - Save the World
LLX VirtueVerse! - Check out my crazy Toons
This is the size of group that we have balanced AVs for, 6.
-Positron 06/07/06 07:27 PM