Cerberus: WIP


Aaron123

 

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So this is my first totally digital drawing. I like it, I think. Feedback would be nice!

http://img227.imageshack.us/my.php?i...ecolorshk9.jpg

This is a demonic hellhound themed Ninja MM... well, that's what he is in CoV anyway. He's more of just a demonic hellhound ninja here. A nemesis of SL and his people. Lemme know whachya think!


 

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Nice !


 

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That isn't me!!

Seriously though, I'm digin it.


 

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well done serengeti...especially for a first total digi work.

critiquewise: I like it all but his head seems "off" to me...cant really place my finger on it. to much "dome"? hrrmmm...not sure I can articulate what strike me as odd...just know it does. if I think of it I'll let ya know.~


...the sword is truth...

~whiteperegrine~

 

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The dome part of the head's okay--the muzzle/mouth piece isn't rendered correctly. More of the front of the mouth needs to show in this case, and the mouth needs to be rotated on its axis just a little bit.


 

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Hmm... I'm not sure I understand what you mean Aaron...


 

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The eyes and head are shown from a slightly tilted angle (as in you can see both eyes, so he is not looking straight to the left), but his snout looks as if he were looking straight to the left.

To fix it, either "turn" the snout (you should see abit more of the front of his snout, or turn his head so you can only see one eye and he is looking to the left more.


 

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Great work there, man, especially for being your first digital piece... it's a lot different from traditional medium's I'm finding

That dogboy's got some great musculature and all, but, ya, I would agree with the others that a touch more of the front of his snout should be shown.

As for issues concerning his dome... it could be right or it could be wrong... it's really hard to say since I've never seen a dog man in real life XD. As canines go, ya, he has way too much forehead. Most of their brain is kept back behind the eyes and, as a result, most wolf like canines tend not to have much in the way of a forehead. Of course, for human beings, it's mostly the opposite... so, um... it could be right or it could be wrong ... so I'm gonna err on the side of the artist knowing what he's doing and say you did it right and proper

One other things... the background is a touch too saturated. It really competes with the figure and makes the image a bit hard on the eyes. Maybe tone down the saturation of the background a bit?


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Wolfie boy! :