Do I have something in my teeth?

A little while ago I posted this pic (someone caught me off guard right after I had eaten a jelly donut). I've been brushing and brushing, but I just can't seem to get that ncie white shine back.

What do you think, do I need a Whitener ?

Oh my.

That looks awesome. Good shading, good colors, and he looks like he's totally angry.

Very nicely done.

Xer

The picture is great!

But...

The first thing I thought of when I saw the pic was that he was on the can... I'll stop.

Yeah, nice progression.

A few notes:

-We're not seeing nearly enough of the underside of the jaw for that perspective. You've got the top half of the face tilted back, but the jaw is being viewed straight-on.

-the neck looks like cloth. Grab an anatomy book and check out the way the muscles in the neck intersect with each other and try to emulate that.