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Hrmmm.... It seems sorta short and ham fisted at the end right?... ergh.
Gonna try to tighten this up and proceed to ACT II.
Wish me luck.
-CJ
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hmmm yeah kinda!
I really like the set up though Crimson!! 
man that's ambitious... don't forget to sleep or eat, or breathe.
I liked it. Very nice! Cannot wait to see when it is done...
Very cool <O,O> I can't wait to see this done <. .> I'm not movin till it is!
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Oof-ah! It's good to take showers and wear clean clothes... right?
Yeh, the pacing is off at the end and I can extend the beginning to add more character development.
Anywho, I think somebody asked what style it was gonna be(TA I think), well I'm gonna shoot for a "Blade of the Immortal" type style. With it's sketchy lines adding to the action and drama instead of just coming off as "busy".
Here's some design sketches cause I'm gonna take a day off after that 2 day panel fest.
Crimson when he show's up.
Kid Crimson hopefully not lookin too yaoi-ish.
King's Mask just the front. I think I misplaced the profile sketch.
Oookay! Time to shoot at 3D rendered models with 3D rendered Rifle!!
-CJ
I love the look of this!
Looking foward to seeing it progress
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That's awesome.
Yeah the pacing is a bit off at the end. I think the beginning's fine though. You can always add character development later after the initial, all-important, reader's-attention-grab.
Dude! Very awesome!!!
I want a baseball powerset now though... hehehe
I dont think Kid Crimson looks too yaoi-ish at all. Hair would have to be like 3 feet longer :-p
HAARRGH!!!!
Whew. Ok. It's a whole lot more tidy now.
ACT 1
-CJ
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Hrmmm.... It seems sorta short and ham fisted at the end right?... ergh.
Gonna try to tighten this up and proceed to ACT II.
Wish me luck.
-CJ