Looks nice... Foreshortening is not that easy, but you did a good job there on his arm.. Nice detail, too.. especially for a sketch. 
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OK here is the 1st go at it. Obviously just a sketch at this point, I can not do them this fast and shade and color also, sorry.
Assassin of Thor
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I can't see it yet!! 
Damn websense blocks it.
I'll check it out when I get home though! Thank you Celsia!!! 
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Oku No Te - lvl 50 MA/SR Scrapper
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Nyghtfyre - lvl 50 DM/SR Scrapper
Champion
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OK here is the 1st go at it. Obviously just a sketch at this point, I can not do them this fast and shade and color also, sorry.
Assassin of Thor
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Who locked the washroom!!!
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OK here is the 1st go at it. Obviously just a sketch at this point, I can not do them this fast and shade and color also, sorry.
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Oh I am just seeing this for the first time Celsia!!
That is awesome!
ty ty ty !!
what do you mean just a sketch anyways? 
later when you have more time would you try to ink and color it? I would like to see that!
But that pencil looks great!
hey, i posted my character picture earlier I forgot to mention that he was a fire/elc blaster lol.
Nice work also 
OK working on number 2, attempting a char in setting this time. This is really the 1st time I have attempted something like that, and I think it is going fairly well (the sceen is not too complex by design) I would call it a rough at this point, just starting on details. Then I come home and leave my fav pencil and eraser at work. grrrrrr 
Ok this is Voodookitten, I put her is a simple environment (this is acually take 2 my 1st rough was not doing it for me). I will now officially be calling these line drawing, and I know portions are still slightly rough. Inking and color may come later (waiting on a new toy). So take a look and tell me what you think!
I know this is out of order a little, but I also stated I would do what hit me. I will attempt to do as many as possible be very patient.
Wow! Thank you! I really like it. It's a very adventuresome and difficult pose too. I think you pulled it off well. You do an excellent job with the details.
I do have a few small suggestions and they are only suggestions!
1.) Adding more of a cheekbone portrusion just below her left eye. Just give a little more form to that side of her face.
2.) The right arm looks a little awkward. It's hard to describe how I would correct it.
I think I will try an overlay of corrections so you can see what I mean. I am more of a visual person and not particularly great with words. c.c I think you may benefit from it as well, since artists tend to be more visual in general. Words can be misinterpreted too much.
I appreciate your work! I will give you something to look at for improvement reference later today. But there is very little that honestly looks awkward to me. The picture is really great and you display great talent! Beback soon!
Celsia,
I can see improvements with each picture you post. Keep it up! 
I noticed the cheekbone looking at it now, and really see what you are saying. The hand I think 2 things happend.
1. I wanted her gripping the ledge which is anatomically easy and natural to do but may not have come off that great.
2. More important I think I was not sure how to handle the glove detail at that angle for a few reasons. The glove design seems like it should be kinda stiffl and to make that pose would need to bend and I am not sure how I would bend it or where it would bend. The natural anatomy in that position would be wrist and forearm suppination (think that is the right term or rotating inwards), the glove just did not seem to want to go that way. It may have been better to detatch the hand portion from the forarm part rather then bend it like I did. Another way would have been to have her lay her hand along the ledge rather then grasping it, I think that would solve the oddness, but not what I wanted. I you remove the glove detail I think the arm actually looks ok, the detail is screwing it up I think.
I also kinda realized I was doing 2 point perspective unintentionally, and that could be tweeked some, but that is me being nitpicky. I really tried to push myself somewhat with this and with assassin. If you do not push you do not get getter right? I find that I do ok with kinda stock poses, but if I use a stock pose it sometimes lacks visual punch and falls flat and looks flat. When I am dissapointed in what I did I usually find it is because it lacks the impact I was striving for.
I do like the detailed stuff, glad it shows. I have been working on a portrait item for one of my chars that has some chainlink in it kinda in closeup so you can not fudge it. What a pain in the [censored], took me like 2 hrs just on that.
Thanks for the comments, and feedback. I really have very little experience and no formal training but am having loads of fun and do find it relaxing.
Can I pretend I'm not selfish and am only posting my pictures to help out? Maybe not hehe.
Here is Jade though.
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Oh I want in!!! I must've missed this thread...
Here's the whole rock family:
Roxstar
Tormented Soil
Lady Comet
Magma Roc
....and just for fun here's Roxstar in his brand new costume! Sorry I just redid some of the costumes and took new screenies so I had to post them somewhere.
Protecting Paragon by any mean nessesary P Dude!
Trying to mix thing up a little bit.
Very nice, Celsia. I really like the sunglasses in his right hand.
Something about his left hand seems off to me though. Maybe if you made the arm get slenderer towards the hand, and emphasized the palm more it wouls make it easier to distinguish which way the hand is facing and between the thumb and fingers.
Otherwise I like it.
-Pep
Just a critique:
The lips on him make him look a bit feminine. The rest looks good, though.
I see the slightly off rotation you mentioned in the left hand pep. It was drawn with the thumb out to the right like it should be but when I added the hands from the villian you lost that perspective, and I see what you are saying. As for mouths kinda see it, and mouths for whatever reason are my weakest part of the face (at least what I have most trouble with)
What I like to do for male mouths is just do the inside lines then put a line underneath for the chin. Just look at Mr. Mighty's mouth. It's a trick I picked up from Jim Lee. It makes the lips less defined and more masculine I think.
Try it out, you may like it. You may not.
-Pep
I went and did a few touchups and updated the original post ty for the suggestions.
Yes the mouth looks better, and I fiddled with the hand slightly so the rotation problem should be gone. (sorry the erasing shows so well was also editing in ps using a tablet for the 1st time) Looks kinda like a milk ad a little. 
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OK here is the 1st go at it. Obviously just a sketch at this point, I can not do them this fast and shade and color also, sorry.
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his arm that's reaching up is a bit short
hmm...maybe I should attempt to draw some of mine
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Protecting Paragon by any mean nessesary P Dude!
Trying to mix thing up a little bit.
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Oh man! I love that pose! Awesome job, Celsia. That peace sign is a great idea.
OK from the Windy Streets of Paragon Hemily.
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OK from the Windy Streets of Paragon Hemily.
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So Cute!!!
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OK from the Windy Streets of Paragon Hemily.
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/em wolf whistle
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[color=#cc99cc]Flirty and cute, looks good!
Wow!!! Great job on that one! Quit calling it 'just a sketch' that's moved far beyond 'just a sketch'!