please reply i wanna know if i should continue or not...
I escorted them to the leader branishing my inpressive plasma blade. We balanced over deep pools of raw suage on small pipes. We crawled through pipes, we swam through raw suage. We eventualy made it to a small room with a torn up red curtain blocking a dore. I pulled aside the curtain revealing a large room with a pile of garbage that looked very much like a throne where an enormus beast sat. There was fear in the small mans eyes as he looked at the leader!
I made a weird story about being the leader of the lost heres the first chapter tell me if its any good.
Chapter One
I looked around, my vision was blurred... A mutated looking guy handed me an empty bottle with gasonline and a piece of lit paper on the end... a moltav Cocktail. "Throw it and lets get outta here before any capes show up!" he yelled I did as i was told and the building went up in flames. We ran as fast as mutatedly possible and I saw a hero running rather fast with sparks behind his boots after us. Before i knew what was happening I was in a block of ice. The stranger who must have been helping me pulled out a green glowing rifle and shot plasma at him. FFFFFFWeeeoO It hit the hero and he fell over. "cmon before he gets up" he said as the ice thawed. I ran with him to a sewer he led me further and further in until we must have been all the way in. Another mutant it appeared to be approached me with a sword. I got scared and panicked. "To the leader of The Lost" he stated.