Hey Mirror_Man, this is Stone-Fox (aka Seahammer).
Thanks for the glowing review, I really appreciate your kind words and your very useful constructive criticism. I've given the whole arc another once-over and updated it with some additional dialogue, colored the titles, added a character description as well as dialogue for Baron von Cullen, re-worded the clue for the Uranium Core, and also added some foreshadowing for the final mission.
After I updated the arc, I played through it again, and I have to hand it to you: it plays much better now. I even went back to my other published arc (The Gypsy Chronicles) and applied some of your suggestions there. Thanks a million!
I'm really flattered that you liked the story/writing. I've got a few more ideas for my next arc, but I'm going to be busy for a while so I don't know when I'll get a chance to put my next one together. In the meantime, you should check out The Gypsy Chronicles
. When I've got the time, I'll also jump back into your Galactic Protectorate multi-arc!
