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Arc Name: Fugitive of Justice
Arc ID: 20502
Faction: Heroic
Difficulty Level: 1 Mandatory AV/EB Fight, 30-40 suggested.
Synopsis: A normal mission goes horribly wrong. Can you escape the web before you're caught by PPD?
Estimated Time to Play: 1-2 Hours
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1) Some of the writing is cringe worthy.
2) 2nd Mission Leet Speak: In-game Freakshow do not leet speak as much as this. It is irritating to read a whole line of dialogue full of 4s and 0s. Your boss starts of with leet speak then suddenly transitions to normal speak.
3) 2nd + 3rd Mission Intro Text: The last paragraph tells us to go and have a break. This might be better as the previous mission's return success text or better left out altogether.
4) 3rd Mission hostage spawn are freakshow instead of longbow or PPD.
5) It seems that the 3rd mission wanted to be escort a hostage to objective. Instead you have used an Ally for the hostage.
6) 4th Mission Boss spawn group seems to be wrong.
7) 5th Mission custom mobs seems to be overpowered. I'm playing Villainous on my lvl 28 Ele/Kin and I got wiped by a spawn of 2 lts and a minion 2 levels below me. Your End Boss is AV/EB with no warning in the mission intro text. Seems like Archery/Regen or something because I could did have have enough DPS to overcome her regen.
Overall has potential to be fun, I like the twist, but due to many inconsistencies and lack of tuning:
Rating 1 star:
-1 for bad writing
-1 for bugs (like wrong spawn type)
-1 for spike in difficulty
-1 for undefeatable EB on easiest difficulty
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Mine
Arc Name: The Haiku Master
Arc ID: 32175
Length: Long (4 missions)
Difficulty: Definitely soloable. Even the 2 EB/AV at the end with full tray of purples. Since the mobs are sonic/ice blasters, large groups might have problems if they use 1 tank to take alpha.
Description: Haiku are sacred. All haiku that is not good: they must be destroyed.
