SGT_Paine

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    More then likely, other plans are in the works too, possibly good or bad. Hopefully, not bad, as Castle did post some of his ideas here first and should they bad, the mobs will likely look to burn blasters at the stake first

    *Straps on his helmet* Luckily, I am prepared for the worst should it happen. *slams door on his underground bunker* CLANG!

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    *mutters* Dam it Fusilier, locked me out AGAIN! *finishes setting detonation cord* Hope you like the new door chime I installed *sets timer and runs for cover*....*waits*....*waits* Damn Timebomb takes forev..*BOOM!*

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    *Pops head up from his bunker* What the heck is all that racket?...*sees a plume of smoke a short distance away* Dam it Outrider, do you really feel it was necessary to blow up my garage door?

    [/ QUOTE ]*Sneaks past Fusiller into his bunker while he checks his garage.*
  2. I am going to get the GvE goodies this weekend. Just having a vertical movement power on my lowbie alts and on my Superspeed alts is worth the 10 bucks for me.
  3. SGT_Paine

    The two six (RP)

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    I've read Dragonlance. The gnomes in dragon lance talk the same way, so I've picked up the paitents to read sentences that have run together.

    [/ QUOTE ]I'm busted. How old were you when you read it the first time. I think I was 18-19 when I read it. The first book of the second trilogy had just come out when I started the first trilogy.
  4. SGT_Paine

    The two six (RP)

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    Personally I see this being the fault of the Admin.

    If the post was found violating of some rules, it is up to the admin to contact the Owner of the post to get them to change it, or edit the post to fix it.

    Just flat out deleting the post doesn't fix the issue, because this is the result.

    Dan, I dont hold you responsible for this because; yes, you were roleplaying.

    while the lack of spaces made it hard to read. It also gave the idea that your character was speaking so fast that his words were running together.

    As for what we are gonna do now, I'm all for trying to continue. Maybe posting an outline of what was nuked.

    [/ QUOTE ]I really did not expect anybody to try and read the stuff that was all run togeather. I wanted to give the impression that Ion was off on another tangent and for people to just kind of think/say "There he goes again.", I tried to put any actual text that needed to be read in before he went off.
  5. SGT_Paine

    The two six (RP)

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    ((well, thanks to cuppajo, we now know what happened. It turns out that writing all your words together without spaces, as Dan43 did to create the illusion of his character speaking quickly without pauses, breaks the tables and mods don't like that. So they deleted the post, which took out 30 pages of the story.

    Please PM me with your choice of what you'd like to do with the thread from this point forward.))

    [/ QUOTE ]I am sorry that my attempt at RP in a RP forum caused 30 some pages of everybodies work to be deleted.

    With that said I think that is a pretty crummy excuse for deleting the 30some pages of this thread. I realize that this webspace belongs to NCSoft. I realize that we do not pay anything....wait actually we do. This space is included in the pricing structure that we pay to play CoH. If something as small as not using proper grammar, punctuation etc. in an attempt to RP on a RP forum can get all the work we put into it deleted I do not think I will be contributing anymore. If they chose to not restore our 30pages then I will no longer be posting in the RP forum.

    Thanks for all the fun. I will see yall if our 30 pages are replaced. Otherwise it was nice to know you.
  6. SGT_Paine

    The two six (RP)

    [censored]?

    Where did our thread go?
  7. Thanks Sibling. I know what you mean about being a Skeleton. This was actually an expanded version of my CoH bio for SGT. Paine. I wrote and posted it for my SG RP page. I am working on filling it out into at least a short story. That is one of the reasons I would like feedback on it.
  8. I would really like some feedback on this if possible.
  9. This is the journey taken by one young man that saw him leave Paragon City as a boy and return a warrior. Parts of it are my RL autobiography. Parts of it are things I would have done differently if I had known then what I know now. Parts are complete fiction. (I leave it to you to figure out what is what.)

    Chapter One

    16 year old Daniel Paine took one last look at Paragon City as he boarded the bus that would take him to FT. Sill Oklahoma for basic training. With both parents killed just weeks earlier he had run out of options. Social services was planning to place him in a facility for minors and he had no intention of going to what amounted to a prison for the next two years just because he had no other family. A little help from a buddy of his (Jay was always in that gray area. Not quite a criminal but not quite on the straight and narrow either.) and he had the documents he needed to convice the Army that he was 18. He wasn't quite sure what waited for him out in the world but it had to be better than two years in a Paragon City juvenile facility.

    14 weeks later he was on another bus. This time he was headed to FT. Benning Georgia. Army basic training had agreed with him. Always a big kid he was now 6'2" and 235 lbs of hard muscle. He had taken to military life like the proverbial duck to water. Having impressed his DI's they had convinced him to apply for some of the more advanced training the Army offered. So he was headed to GA to learn to jump out of a perfectly good aircraft. If he passed that it would be on to the Ranger course. He had also learned that despite never having handled a firearm before that he was a gifted marksman. Successful completion of the Ranger course would see him enrolled in the US Army Sniper School. He had been told that only the best soldiers completed the training that lay ahead of him for the next year. His fellow passengers wondered what put the smile on the face of the very large soldier riding with them this fine spring day.

    Chapter 2

    Looking through the scope mounted on his weapon, finger begining to slowly squeeze the trigger SGT. Daniel Paine US Army thought of the events of the last few weeks leading up to this moment. It had all started 6 weeks earlier when he had been summoned to his Battalion Commanders office at 0400 hrs.

    Reporting to the CO was unusual for a simple SGT. Doing so at 0400 was just downright strange. Daniel Paine tried to think of anything he might have screwed up badly enough to be called on the old mans carpet but nothing came to mind. A firm knock and Paine marched in and came to a ramrod straight position of attention giving no indication that he saw the second man dressed in civilian clothes in the room even though he had instinctively sized him up already. Tall, slightly built but in shape. Callouses told of considerable hand to hand combat training. The posture and hair cut said ex-military. His CO began to speak.

    "SGT Paine I would like you to meet Agent Jackson with the DEA. He has a proposal for you."

    "Paine we have a situation in Columbia that we need some help with. There is a major player in one of the drug Cartels operating in Miami, that we can't tough through the US legal system. We want to lure him back to Columbia by disrupting his supply system down there."

    Paine knew what Jackson was hinting at but he wanted it to be made crystal clear so he just stared at the DEA Agent until he elaborated.

    "A hard case huh? Ok let me lay it out. We plan to eliminate this piece of trash, but not on US soil. We want you to go down there and stir stuff up and when he shows we want you to take him out as well. You OK with that?"

    Daniel Paine had no problems with that plan. He had a special kind of hate on for drug dealers. He had no problems with hunting them down like the vermin they were.

    The next 2 weeks saw Paine studying every piece of intell the DEA or Army could provide him and boarding a small unmarked jet late on the afternoon of the 15th day for nighttime HALO insertion into the jungles of Columbia. For a week Paine had done nothing but observe. Locations (both firing and targets), lanes of fire, movement patterns, E&E routes- all the things he needed to know to do his job and stay alive. There was no room for error on this job. He was all alone, a long way from home, no back up, and no cavalry coming if he got into trouble. He had nothing on him to identify him if caught, and no way to call for help.Just a set of map coordinates almost 100 kilometers away and a date and time to be there. A second location and time for pickup if he missed the first was his only safety net. Miss them both and it was a long walk back to the States.

    The last 3 weeks had seen him sabotaging production. Quietly making couriers and their cargo disapear and anything else he could thing of to make a dent in the flow of cocaine going to the dealers in Miami. Finally this moring his target had finally shown up. For the last 8 hours Paine had watched from his hide nearly 1200 meters away on the side of a large hill that gave him a full view of the front of the Hacienda. Seconds earlier his target had emerged and Paine had placed a cross hair on a point level with and just to left of his targets heart (knowing the slight crosswind would push the round slightly 2 the right) and began to sueeze the trigger. As always with good shoot the weapons discharge was a surprise. Paine watched in his scope as the 50 caliber round took his target square in the heart and ended his drug dealing forever.

    Less than 36 hours later an unmaked helo dropped into a clearing for just 30 seconds and lifted off with a tired but satisfied SGT Daniel Paine on board. He would go back for some well deserved R&R ( He knew the really great little place up in the Mountains of North Carolina with very few tourists and a very friendly VERY attractive lady bartender who had a soft spot for him.) Then he would go back to training and preparing himself for whatever his country needed him to do next.

    He suddenly realized that it was 1987 and that it had been 5 years today since he had left Paragon City to escape the Social Services system.

    Chapter 3

    It was cold in the Mountains of North Carolina, but Daniel Paine was sweating as he worked at spliting large pile of firewood. 27 years old now Daniel was a heavily muscled 245 pounds on a 6'2" frame with grey hair cut in a military buzz. He was still moving a little stiffly but felt that he was nearly recovered from his wounds. What was this? The 3rd time things had gone south on a mission. Seemed like that only happened when he worked with a team. Seemed like he never had things go bad when he was on a solo operation. There had been a lot of those in the last 5 years. Ever since that first time the Army had loaned him out to the DEA. Word had gotten around and several government agencies had made use of him over the last few years. No real home but the Army, no family, highly motivated and trained, with uncanny natural ability. His only outside tie was the one he had made in this little mountain town. He had just been passing through 8 years earlier and had stopped for some coffee.

    Pam was 18, with dark hair, brown eyes, and a ready smile for the tall stranger in the Army uniform. When some trucker started giving her a hard time Paine had stepped in. Then so had 2 of the truckers friends. It had lasted less than 15 seconds. Then the soldier had been asking Pam if she was ok while the 3 truckers lay on the floor. After the police had taken statements the local Sheriff revealed that he was Pam's uncle and only living relative. From that day foward Paine had been as welcome in the little town as if he was one of her own. He had been back several times and gotten a little closer to Pam each time. The first time he had been injured he had spent nearly 2 months here recovering and that was the first time Pam had spent the night.

    Stacking the firewood Daniel considered how Pam would react when he told her it was time for him to go. He knew she wanted him to leave the Army and settle down. Her uncle was ready to retire and the Sheriffs job would be his for the asking. The whole town respected him, and nobody else was likely to even run for the office. He suspected that Pops was putting off his retirement waiting for him to decide to settle down. But he also knew there was a lot of jobs left that his nation would need him for. He could not just walk away. For the first time in his life he knew fear. Fear that one of these times when he left, Pam would tell him not to come back.

    Two days later Paine pointed his 1978 XLCR-1000 Harley-Davidson towards FT. Bragg with his fear realized. Pam had told him last night that when he left he should not come back until he had left the Army.

    It was 1992 and Daniel Paine would never return to the little Mountain town. He would know nothing of Pam or the child she carried for 12 years.

    Chapter 4

    It was winter of 2004 an a 26 year old Harley snarled past the Paragon City Limits sign. As he entered the city for the first time in 22 years Daniel Paine wondered why his subconcious had brought him back here of all places, doing so unfortunately brought the sorrow of the last few weeks back to the forefront of his mind.

    Six weeks earlier he had retired from the Army with 22 years of service.
    Things were happening in the world and in the current civilian leadership of his nation that he did not totally understand. The last couple of missions he had been on had left him feeling like he had done something wrong for the first time in his career. So he had put in his paperwork and the day he was discharged he had called a number that he had not used in 12 years. The number was still good, but the news from the other end was not.

    He had called Pops to find out if he thought Pam would still want him to come back now that he was retired. He learned that a child had been born 9 months after he left the last time. He could only sit in stunned silence at what followed next. Both Pam and the daughter he had never know had died 2 years before when a drunk driver had crossed the center line.

    For six weeks he had drifted slowly across the country never really knowing or caring where he was, until the PCL sign had brought him back to the here and now. Figuring this was as good a place as any he rented a 3 room apartment in a building with a secure garage near Atlas Park. Money was not a real concern He had his retirement pay, but more importantly he had lived a fairly spartan warriors existance. Of course he had nothing to do but wander the city he had left 22 years before and get to know it again. That and try to escape the still raw wound where everything that ever really mattered had been taken from him. And deep down he knew it was his own fault, because he had chosen to put duty first for all those years.

    Chapter 5

    A small smile crept across Daniel Paines face as he surveyed the result of 2 months of preperation. He had taken the apartments on either side of his. Moved into the one on the left that was shown on the supers books as unoccupied, set up his workshop in the center unit that had been soundproofed (his original apartment) and made the right hand unit his publically know domicile (It was really a empty decoy in case anybody came looking for him).

    In the center unit he now had a small but very well equiped machine shop and gunsmithing set up. He also had a large stockpile of weaponry that was not legal for anybody outside of the military to possess. A complete set of a new experimental body armor that was lighter, more flexible, and stronger than anything he had ever used before finished off his spending spree.

    Just as he had 22 years before Jay had been there for him. He was still walking that gray line. He was able to help Daniel get his hands on some very heavy duty ordnance and the heros license that would allow him to operate openly. And more than that had willingly financed Daniels plans.

    As he walked the streets of Paragon City in December of 2004 he had looked at the city that spent the first 16 years of his life in and he did not like what he saw. Gangs ruled the streets. Skulls, Hellions, and Trolls fought amongst themselves and the people paid the price. Drugs were rampant. The worst seemed to be unique to Paragon, something called Supradine. He had never encountered it on any of his DEA work in SouthAmerica.The Rikiti Invasion had devestated much of the city. Many of the most powerful and well known heroes were gone, probably to never return, on the ill-fated counter invasion. And for the first time in several months something besides apathy pushed the pain and loss he felt back. It was anger at what was happening to his city. And he began to form a plan. He would join the new wave of heroes that had risen to defend the city in this darkest hour. He had no powers to use, but he did have a life time of training. That would have to be enough.

    Now he was ready. He had meet a couple of people that were willing to supply him with information and assistance in the course of finding Jay and getting thing set up. These contacts would point him in the right direction. he would start at the bottom, with the low level gangers and work his way up. Eventually he would make a dent. He would make a difference. He looled around his workshop and hoped that having a mission again would be enough to make the loss he felt bearable.
  10. SGT_Paine

    The two six (RP)

    Ion appeared from the basement just as Brian walked back out of the door. Seeing Mystic and Newt by the main desk he approached rather sheepishly.
    "Sorry about the mix up boss. I was just trying to help out. "
    Reaching down to his belt he withdrew a small device that looked something like a spring powered hypodermic.
    "All I need is a small tissure sample from everybody and I can key everybodies genetic code into the field generator. After I do that everybody will be able to pass through at will. It won't impede movement at all. Anything you are carrying or wearing will pass through also. You won't feel a thing and it won't damage any object you bring through either."
    Ion paused briefly and looked around. When he next spoke his voice had a hopeful tone.
    "I don't see Sting. Maybe he did not even try to get back in after I turned the field on."

    "On a side note did you two see your boxes? The earpiece is the new comm unit I mentioned. The belt is an AG unit I designed for a friend of mine named SGT. Paine. If anybody wears shades I have something else you might be interested in. It is a modified version of the computer in my armor. It gives a heads up display in the lense with range, targeting priority information, and a bunch of other stuff. Also they link with each other so you can keep track of you teammates location, targets, injuries and things like that. You can also access the internet and if you have the correct code the LAN that I will be setting up here as well."
  11. SGT_Paine

    The two six (RP)

    Standing toe to toe with the rather large Sting, Ion refused to be intimidated. He had little experience with real world social interaction but his studies on the subject told him that if he let himself be cowed now it would only invite further hazing in the future. He just hoped that if Sting did chose to make the confrontation physical that the integrity of his armor would remain intact. He really was worried about what would happen in the event of a major loss of containment.
  12. SGT_Paine

    The two six (RP)

    Ion turned to face Sting. He was smaller than the other man but he did not give an inch to the larger Sting. Speaking calmly he addressed Stings concerns one by one.
    "First, my comment about your earlier battle had nothing to do with quality, but rather everything to do with quantity. There are A LOT of bad guys in the Row these days. And the PD has seen fit to send just a handful of metas to clean it up. There is strength in numbers.

    Second, I was not trying to boss anybody around. I ASKED Newton if he could help the movers. I was not thinking of a wormhole by the way. But rather I was wondering if you could make the crates light enough that the movers could bring them in by hand instead of having to resort to heavy equipment.

    Third, since this armor was never intended to stand up to the kind of stress metas like you and Cool can apply and since I do not have your experience nor combat skills I have no doubt that you could peel me like a grape. However if you chose to do so I do not think anybody but Cool and POSSIBLY yourself would survive the radiation exposure that would follow.

    So with those three things in mind do you and I really have a problem?"
  13. SGT_Paine

    The two six (RP)

    "Ok, minilab sounds good."

    From outside of the 2-6 a large trucks air brakes are heard and a few seconds later a burly truck driver sticks his head in. "Anybody here by the name of Black?"

    Ion turns and replies. "That would be me. I assume you have a delivery for me. Three crates?"

    "Thats right Mack. Big damn crates and heavy as hell. Where you want'em? And don't say upstairs!"

    Looking at Newton "Do you think you could give these gentlemen a hand bringing in my equipment? One of the crates has a small version of my containment unit so I can take my armor off to sleep. The new material I created let me build one much smaller than my original. The walls on that one were three feet thick and it was by no means mobile. My new one can be moved by truck at least. The other two contain some of my electronic and machine equipment as well as some goodies to make the 2-6 more comfortable and more secure. All of it togeather should not weigh more than three tons or so, how light can you make that much mass?"
  14. SGT_Paine

    The two six (RP)

    Actually I don't have any paperwork. Like I said my father grew up around here, so when I got this armor a few weeks ago and could leave my containment unit I soon found out that my condition did have an upside. I could do things that ordinary people could not, so I got myself registered as a Hero and came here to Kings Row. Kind of a back to my roots thing. I saw what happened to the 2-6 and then I saw you guys move in. I have been watching you. Word on the street is that you are gonna try an clean up the Row. I want in. I can bring things to the party besides my powers also. For 20 years I was in a containment unit without a lot of physical activity avalible to me. You can only do so many pushups and situps in a day. so to make a long story short I engaged in a lot of mental activity. In other words I am a genuis. I hold multiple degrees including two Doctorates. I can design and build almost any gadget you can dream up. This armor is a prototype of the ArmyLandWarriorArmorSystem but the material it is lined with that contains my radiation is all mine. I saw your first battle. You guys are going to need all the help you can get and I don't see to many heroes crawling out of the woodwork to offer it, so paperwork or not I think you should show me where to set up shop.
  15. SGT_Paine

    The two six (RP)

    "I guess that makes it my turn."

    A lean 5'10" armored figure stood in the doorway of the 2-6.

    "My name is IonFlux. My father grew up in this area. He joined the Army during WWII and they used him as a walking experiment in radiation exposure. As a result I wound up as a walking radiation hazard. This suit let's me move about without killing everything in my path. Careful, controlled release of the radiation I give off let's me affect my environment. I can make the badguys easier for you to bring down, it also makes them weaker and clumsier. That means less chance that they can actually do us harm in return. By firing concentrated bursts from my hands and eyes I can incapacitate my opponents. I can hover thanks to my armor. I can speed up my metabolism as well at that of allies who are in close vicinity. This lets you run faster, heal quicker, and use your own powers more often for a short period of time. I can also give off a rad burst on a wavelength that is benificial to humans. It will cause a burst of rapid healing to any injuries if you are close enough to me when it goes off. Any questions?"