Pious

"Tyler! What do you think you're doing?" exclaimed Myrtyl. Revealing herself for the first time. Pious gazed in astonishment at the striking resemblance to Ebony, the ground floor receptionist.

What are you a clone?! "Jesus Myrtyl, you look just like your mum!" Noticing the ring of fire around Myrtyl's feet, Pious looked at the shooter. 'Tyler', so thats his name.

"Open your eyes next time! It's me, Myrtyl!" she exclaimed, her tan glowing bright red.

((zomfg!!! Tyler's coming ))

Pious and Natoe arrived at the first floor.

"This is gonna be so cool!" said Pious. "After you Mrytyl".

Myrtyl swiped her card and the door slide open, revealing an expanse of metal clading.

"NRVS is downstairs, on the first floor" Myrtyl said, matter-of-factly.

"Then lets go! Oh and Myrtyl, you really should show yourself or else people will think I'm crazy."

Pious sighed. "Whatever Natoe. Just listen; aparantly, the place you wandered into is indeed a Neural-Reality Virtual Simulation Training Room. Myrtyl will let us in. I dont know about you, but I'm excited! Do you think we should like pass a secret note around the class? I'm sure everyone wud love to sneak into an NRVS."

"Yes, go with him" said Myrtyl. "There is indeed a training room, I can let you in if you want."

"You're lieing!" Pious exclaimed, sheer excitement on his face. "You mean to tell me there really is a simulation room?!"

"Yeah, follow me."

"Did you hear that Natoe?"

Chapter Two is redone.

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the 'Uncle Jack' who shows up is suppossed to
be Rebel Bass before he leaves the military.

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ohhhh the arm! yes of 'cos.

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an unplanned fluke to be honest. I was in
the middle of taking some screenies with him when i came
across a fire in steel and decided to take a break and put
it out. The backdraft took him out

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ROFL!! not literally ¬¬

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attempted to do a story with 2 levels. Still not
entirely sure if it worked

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hehe. yeah. i noticed the slight nativity subtexts. the birth in the stable, the north star and the 'three men' gave it away, but it worked 'cos i still understood Glascow Kiss as herself as opposed to a mimic of Mary. i missed out the GG statue bit.. but i see the likeness now. and I've only just figured out the virgin pregancy was a subtext to Mary. hehe.

looking forward to more of ur creative stuff!

Now, slids on shades, faking a french accent les talk business. how wud u like to er.. how u say.. do comique comme une collaboration.. les easter vacances ou la summer period? ((translation: wanna do a comic this holiday?))

"Well the only other possible explanation would be an NRVS training room and I dont think such a facility would be so unsecure. Besides, it said nothing about a simulation room in the prospectus.." his voice trailed off as noticed the name "Myrtyl" hovering in mid-air near the windows.

"What are you doing in here?" Pious exclaimed.

"I was bored" came her voice, her name bobbing across the room.

"Natoe, meet Myrtyl; she's the receptionist's daughter." he said, glaring angrily. "I'd be careful if I were you. She's a stalker."

"Dirigente has disabled our swipe cards Natoe.. wait, did you say Bloody Bay? In here?. What like a teleporter?" Pious was curious.

"Unless you're talking about the library, I'm not going. Nah-han no way!" Pious stated.

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Q: Would you rather I carried on posting these on here or the original website?


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...they look nice, frames are set out well and those are some well taken screenies you used

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ARIGATO GOSAIMAS!!! I've quoted you onto my back cover, is that okay?

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wow, 5 stars and over two hundred viewings! *dances a happy dance*

"Nah, I dont want a fresh start.." Pious began, noticing the disappointment in Natoe's face, "I want us to be friends". He smiled and shook his hands.

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"Do I really look like Denis the Menace?"

Pious wasn't familiar with a 'Dr Cola Coca' but he was certainly glad to hear 'Saber Tooth' was back in the Ziggursky Prison. Of course, he didn't express this.

"Sorry to hear." He found himself pitying Natoe; after a morning of hating him. "You know what, you're not so bad after all. Maybe we got off on the wrong start hey?"

"Oh my god, Saber Tooth is your dad?" Pious asked. "Dude, thats not a good rep" he added, now lying on his bed. "having said that, my elder brother Jackson ran away from home the other week, Mum says he's joined the Trolls."

"Your dad's a criminal?!" Pious asked. "You better be careful you dont turn out the same way, or else you'll be recieving Dirigente's fireball."

"You're a nutcase you know that.. you shouldn't go about taking your anger out on invisible kids and defenceless trees." Pious said. "What in gods name did that letter say anyway."

"Whatever" he replied. Idiot. He slammed that door on me on purpose! Noticing Natoe's possessions all around the room, he added "when the hell did you come in here?"

Without waiting for an answer, Pious set about exploring the room.

"Theres only one toilet and shower. We're expected to share."

"Whatever"

They turned around a corner and climbed a flight of stairs. Reaching the second floor, they searched for their dormitary.

"Now get out of my office."

NOOOoo.. Pious thought. I'll be stuck with this idiot for the whole day?! Dirigente, you suck!

+ I heard that Pious; that's four thousand for you. + Dirigente was inside his head.

Oh my god, he's a telepath! Thought Pious, and he ran out of the room.

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Natoe was apologizing, but Pious ignored him. He lit up another cigarette and Pious rolled his eyes.

"You want one?"

"No!" he exclaimed. "Mrs Alexis said all forms of unhealthy drugs are forbidden from the school, I'd put that out if I were you."

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You may call me Colonel Johnson - I teach Technology, and lecture on Freedom Corps, Longbow and Arachnos among other things."

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((cool! a teacher))

"I shouldn't have lost my temper." Mr Dirigente shifted his focus to Pious. "Please sir, give me another chance, I really want to learn."

Mr Dirigente folded his arms in a pose that reminded Pious' of his own father. A long silence, followed and Pious noticed as the headmaster assumed a stance; his shoulders were broad and his arms laid by his side, chest was high. Pious recognised this as the pose of a true hero.

"I'm suspending you for the rest the day." Pious' eyes widened. "At five o' clock this evening, I want you back here in my office for detention. You will write a three thousand word essay on Hero One; who he was and what he stood for. I'm banning you from accessing anything and anywhere but the library and your dormitories. Now get out of my office."

"I dont think so Pious, you aint gonna make me hit you."

Drats, he figured me out. Pious noticed a flash of light outside the room and quickly fixed up. The door opened and Mr Dirigente walked directly towards Natoe. He glared at him for a long while and Pious wondered what was going on.

"Both of you. Sit down" he commanded, motioning towards two armchairs across the room. "Fighting." he said, glaring into Pious' eyes now. "In my school." He spoke with such authority that Pious' knees almost gave way. "I have zero tolerance for hoodlum" he emphasised, " If you want to behave like the common thugs outside, I will treat you like one." A small ball of fire grew from his palm and Pious got the message.

"Considering the extent of the damage to Ms Asbet's classroom, and the disturbances you have caused since you've met, I should exclude you both." A sudden wave of sheer regret swept over Pious' body. He felt like crying. "Give me a reason, not to."

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those two were completly oblivious to the other people around them

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(( ))

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My force feild couldnt hold them

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(( ))

With a brilliant flash off light, headmaster Dirigente teleported into the music room, Pious in his arms. He grabbed Natoe by his shoulders, turned to Ms Asbet and spoke in a casual tone. "Morning Desdemona, I'll take it from here." with that, the two boys vanished. After scanning the extent of damage caused, the headmaster disappeared in a second flood of light.

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Pious found himself yet again, on the second floor offices. This time, he was in the room that had been locked earlier, and Natoe was by his side.

"Welcome to the headmaster's office jerk" he spat, hoping to provoke Natoe. He knew full well that the head was on his way, but he wanted Natoe caught red-handed.

((over to you Gaz))

((this is fun))

"STOP IT!", Ms Asbet came running, bumping into some desks in her hurry. "STOP IT RIGHT NOW, THE TWO OF YOU."