Stygian Claw
Great costume and great name! This combination of colors and patterns works really well. The hood kind of reminds me of the main character from the Assassins Creed video game. The claws add a menacing look to what can only be a villain. Nice job.
Percival Cavendish
The write up for this character really adds some much needed identity to what might otherwise be too plain. From certain angles the old man face looks zombie-ish. Its too bad there isnt a pipe option. It would work better than the cigar. Plus, the shillelagh ends up looking like a leg bone due to the limitations of the palette. Still, we have a character design that works on a thematic level.
Corpse Bride
Ive never really been a big fan of the blend option for costumes, but it really works in your favor here. The dark red is perfectly suited to the bloodstained gown look. Making her a necro MM is a no-brainer. Have you thought of a background for her? Perhaps zombies crashed her wedding during the first emergence of the walking dead
Cobweb
Im kind of bummed that there arent any screencaps that really zoom in on the character. From what I can see, there is a good color pattern, and the chest option really helps in preventing the costume from being too red. Good mix of costume set pieces, too. What is on the side of her head? Id like to see the boots and gloves in the lighter greys to see if it adds or detracts from the overall look. Still, looks good!
Voltaic Striker
That chest emblem is a perfect fit for the Diablo option (it is Diablo, isnt it?). The eyewear is a great idea for an accessory, considering her powersets. If I had to nitpick, Id say theres just something about those boots that arent working for me.
Black Mary Chino
I love the name. It basically translates to Black Cherry (maraschino cherries) for me, which makes sense to me since a lot of pirates were Black something or other. This character has a great swashbuckling feel to it, and the cheetah spots add to her mystery. Who is she? Where is she from? Is that one of the chains around her neck? Is there a reason why theyre there? If not, Id change it to something else.
Little Crooked
Ive yet to use the jester pieces, myself, but you put them together effectively, using a good mix of red and grey. And the light grey serves as a nice accent color, that helps break up what might become monotonous and giving the eyes a place to rest and/or focus on.
Red Drakon
Im a little unclear as how best to approach this one. The main point for me is the scaled body parts are they part of the costume or part of this characters flesh? The boots and gloves make me think costume, but the upper torso makes me think flesh. I would suggest making some alterations to clear up this visual misinterpretation. Keep the helmet, horns and wings, though. They really add to the monstrous effect that I can only hope you were going for.
Hamek
I dont have much to say that wouldnt be repetitive. Good mix of red and darks, broken up into an easily identifiable pattern. The combination of pieces for the helmet looks great. The gladiator pads work really well in this design. I cant tell if the visor and handprint is the light grey or the cream color, but it does seem like one of the colors is missing. If I wanted to be a stickler for the sake of this contest, Id suggest using the light grey on the belt instead of the red. Its almost as if its not really there.
Hallucinacannon
Crazy name. I like it. Good, simple design. Almost reminiscent of Seraffs golden age/silver age looks. I like how youve used the red-red as a centerpiece for the design, and since you used it as the main color of the beret, Id suggest using it as the main color of the thigh highs, putting the dark red where the cream color is so you dont end up with a light against light. Good job, overall. I could see this one having a Longbow version for one of its costumes.