Moonlady

Cheers for the review.

You've pointed out quite a few things that I hadn't considered - especially the pacing thing, need to look into that.

Thanks again.

Submitted my 'Time's Shadow' arc to CoHMR. Would love to see you review it when you have the time.

First of all, sorry for the delay. I noticed your comment on my arc a while ago but haven't gotten around to playing yours until recently. I've left a comment for you on the MA comment system - not a bad arc at all. I also played your Suppression arc and left a comment for that one, too. If you want the full review (it's just my personal opinion, though), feel free to PM me.