Makavell

Makavell was jumping from roof to roof trying to find the heroines. After a few rooftop hops he saw a small group of Crey retreating from what must have been a small defeat. After chasing them down while staying out of sight the group finally slowed to a halt.

He overheard one say "Time for plan B. Bring in the second batallion."

A few moments later the sky filled with what appeared to be robots.. No, they weren't robots..They were more Crey soldiers. But these were clad in armor much larger and more advanced looking than Makavell's. They flew in on anti-grav technology, like his suit, but also much more advanced.

The large battalion had landed and where in large numbers of 30 or 40. He had to find the others and warn them. Before he could even turn the other way something hit him square in the chest. It appeared to be some clamping electronical claw.

( What the hell?)

He quickly turned around to see one of the new soldiers with a dastardly grin on his face.

"We got one alone over here!"

As the soldiers begun to charge him he tried to fly away, but he just fell face first.

( Oh christ, now what??)

He got back up and began to run. But they were gaining by the second. He had to try to slow them down. He quickly turned around and tried to do something. But nothing. His suit was energy-less. He looked and the claw and the grim reality came to him. The claw somehow malfunctioned his suit.

Before he could think any more, he felt like a sledgehammer hit him in the head. He was out cold.

In the midst of all the chaos, Eddy had lost who he was assigned to help. He never even caught her name. After a while of trying to figure out where he was, he activated his anti-grav boots and glided to the nearest rooftop. As he flew higher and higher he saw the battle commencing. There were heroines everywhere, all fighting in large battles, but it looked like no one had a clear hold over victory. Crey had sheer numbers, but ther heroines were making a dent in there forces. When he arose to the roof, he saw a few Crey agents. There were 4 of them, two arguing with each other and the other two standing guard. he hoped not to get their attention, but no luck there. The two Crey agents standing guard saw him and shouted to the other two.

"We got a new target! Let's take it down!"

(Here goes nothing..) Eddy thought to himself.

They began to fire at him but his armor was impervious to small arms fire. As the bullets bounced off him, he raised his fists, aiming at the two agents in the back of the group. He charged energy from his arms and blasted the two and sent them flying and hopefully knocking them onconcious. The larger two guards were heavily armored, so his energy blasts looked like they would't do much to them. The first guard charged him at a abnormal like speed. The guards were most probably injected with drugs to enchance their agility, and possibly strength. The first guard tackled Eddy knocking him backwards. Eddy wasn't much of a fighter but he had an idea.

( If I charge the suits energy into the upper body, I could enhance the suit's strength.) ( Melee based moves such as Energy Punch and Energy Thrust.)

He kicked back the first guard and jumped up. He charged the energy once more and punched the guard square in the chest, the enchanced strength sending him of the roof. Now one guard was left, but when he looked to find him, he was gone. He had probably gone for reinforcements, which wasn't good. After the battle, Eddy felt exhausted. This was his first real combat situation.

( I really gotta get better at this..)

He chuckled to himself and jumped off the rooftop hoping to find some of the heroines, knowing he wouldn't last long alone.

( OOC: Jeez, one day of school and a war starts! Well I wont have much time for posts but I'll try to post one here or there. I have 2 projects due monday and we have Hurricane Wilma as well..)

Eddy head was pounding. He slowly got up and looked around. After a few minutes of nothing but blurry images things started to clear up. He looked to see if Ms. Parker's assistant was alright. She was against a wall and her leg looked in some pain, but other than that she looked alright. Suddenly, he recognized her. He had know her from High School.

( Is that Mallory? Mallory Swanson?)

His thoughts were confirmed when they spoke to her by the same name. He figured he would catch up with her at a less "hectic" time. Someone had healed him. He figured it was the lady who wasn't there a few minutes ago. She had revealed her name to Ms. Feynman, she was Lady Gwenivere. After a while of listening to their conversation he knew what was going on. Apparently the men who destroyed the lab were Legion soldiers. He had heard of Legion before, they were a very large company in the weapon industries. And now they were in some kind of battle against Crey Industries, he had only heard of them from the scattered advertisments in Paragon City. After a while, the ladies decided it was time for some action. Lady Gwenivere asked him if he could take care of himself, he was uncertain because he hadn't tested the suits combat capabilites yet.

"Haven't tested it in combat yet, but we'll know soon enough."

A few minutes later he was ontop of a rooftop with Mallory, Ms. Feynman, who know had revealed her powers, Ms. Parker,
Lady Gwenivere, and a large group of women who appreared to be fellow superheroines of Parker and Lady Gwen. He put his helmet on and was ready for battle. He raised his fists and they began to glow a bright crimson color..

(OOC: Well level wise Makavell is only level 7, but Rp wise he could fight better. I won't make him a pro at it, since he hasn't tested the combat features of the suit. )

The shooting had finally ended. The sound of the gunshots was still ringing in Eddy's ears. When he got up from behind a now destroyed computer console, he found Ms. Parker shouting at someone in her radio. She was very angry with whoever she was speaking to. He figured it was now safe so he took off the helmet of the suit. He also saw the young girl assisting Ms.Parker behind another piece of now destroyed machinery. But something looked strange, metal debris was floating above her. He watched as she formed the same shield which he accidentally triggered around himself. But suddenly, the shield collapsed and the debris fell on top of the young woman.

" Omigod!"

Eddy quickly ran over and leaped, and by maybe an inch or less managed to push her out of the way of the debris. He had forgotten though that his helmet was not on and the debris crushed his head, turning his world to darkness.

The lab was being destroyed. It must have pained Ms.Parker to see all her equipment being destroyed. He overheard her say something about extraction. He then shouted to her again.

" Is someone coming to get us out of here? We stay here much longer and we may end up like this equipment!

Eddy was shocked at how careless these "Legion" men were. All the bullets were richoceting and destroying equipment. He tried to shout to Ms.Parker over the gunfire.

" Where'd you find these trigger-happy guys?"

Eddy was skeptical. Did the soldiers think that smalls arms fire would damage the suit? But he didn't want any conflicts starting so he begun to comply. But before he was able to speak one soldier fired a few shots at him, but they simply bounced off the field.

"Seems like that won't work.."

Aparrently Eddy had triggered some kind of energy field that surrounded him completely. Nothing could get through it. He was a bit frustrated Miss Parker hadn't told him of the dangers of triggering anything in her lab. But he tryed not to show it.

" Well, this is odd. How can we get this "field" off of the suit?

" Amazing..."

Eddy's words rolled off his tongue when the demonstration was over.

"Ms.Parker? My name is Eddy Ramirez, I'm a student at Paragon Univerity. I have a knack for science..so to say..I have a few nifty inventions Physiks Technologies may find interesting. If you ladies would wait one moment..."

Eddy quickly exited the room and took the elevator back down to the lobby. Next to a couch in the lobby area, Eddy had left a small leather suitcase. He grabbed it and jogged back to the elevator not wanting to keep the ladies waiting.
He briskly walked back into the room with the suitcase.

"This is my first and most promising invention. A suit of armor made of a combination of steel-mesh technology and highly resistant Adamantium."

He opened the suitcase and began to take out silver and gold pieces of a high quality looking armor. He first slipped on the bottom half, boots first, pant leggings, and belt. He then put on the breastplate, engraved with a small round jewel. He slipped on the sleeves and gloves. And finally he put on the helmet.

Makavell

" May I present, Makavell. Named because of my interest in the Italian politician Niccolo Machiavelli."

He stood up standing 6'2 armor-clad in silver and gold.

" Would you ladies care to see some of what Makavell can do?"

A sly smirk showed beneath the helmet.

(OOC: Was also wondering how I could post some in-game screenshots?)

( OOC: Been busy for a while but I have read all thats happened and like where its going. As a small note, I remade Makavell, or Eddy Ramirez, and now he is a young inventor who uses a suit of armor to fight crime..( Iron Man inspired me..heh.)

Ms.Feynman had Eddy speak about acting quickly in emergencies in a Pr program. When it had ended, Eddy decided to go back to Physiks and speak to Ms.Feynman again. He caught her in the lobby just finishing a conversation on her cell phone sounding rather frustrated. He walked over and hoped she wasn't in a bad mood.

" Ms.Feynman, Hello! Sorry to bother you any more, But I also forget to tell you earlier I am an inventor...of sorts, and have something I made you may find interesting.

(OOC: A hint that he could use a job since he is trying to make his way through college.)

(P.S. I tried to edit his intro on page 11 for his changes but I passed the maximum edit time, so ignore that intro.)

(OOC Just bumping it to keep this great story from dying out..)

( OOC: Forgot to mention when i write in parentheses, thats Makavell's thoughts.)

Eddy looked over and was a bit awestruck. He had seen business women but none as pretty as this woman.

" Uh...Yeah, Im fine. But this guy outside, he doesn't look too good."

He then pointed outside and looked over but, to his suprise, the armor-clad figure was gone.

" What the...He was there a second ago..."

He was more than a bit confused. And a bit curious as to who the man was in the first place.

( OOC Hey guys im a new rp-er in the game and to the boards. Hope you like my post! Critiscism is appreciated.)


A young looking man was strolling down the street. He had tall spikey brown hair and was wearing a small pair of sunglasses. He was wearing a red t-shirt and a pair of standard blue jeans. His name was Eddy Ramirez, he was a mutant. He had the power to manifest fire and ice in many different ways. As he continued to walk down the street, something caught his eye.

( What the... Is that a man?)

He looked over to see a red and gold armored figure on the floor. The sidewalk was shattered and there were fragments of his armor everywhere. The large looking man looked mortally injured. Eddy ran over to try and help the man and see if he could find out what happened.

" Sir? Sir?"

He tried to shake the man out of consioucness but to no avail. The armor-clad figure was not budging.

( I need to get this guy some help.. Looks like some kind of hero by the looks of his armor...)

He looked around to see if there was anybody who could call for help. There was no one. Eddy ran down a couple blocks and found a tall, quite futuristic looking building. The large sign read " Physiks Technologies". He quickly ran inside the lobby looking for help. In the lobby he found a small secretary behind a desk looking quite confused to who Eddy was.

" There's a man injured down a couple street blocks! He needs medical assistance! Looks like a hero of sorts!"

The timid looking secretary nodded and dialed for 911 on her desk phone.

( I hope that man is all right... )

( OOC: Hey guys I've been reading this thread and I think its awesome! I wanted to join in, but don't know how i could fit in the story. Any suggestions? My character is a young teenage mutant. )