Friggin_Taser

I /bug'd this in game when it happened.

Next time I'm on I will be petitioning it. I'll post any findings I get there from support over this.

If they want to solve this problem by giving those affected by it free super tailor access, by all means.

But I'm not going to pay for something to correct a bug on their part.

With issue 21 I made a new Arachnos Widow alt of the female gender. As I leveled her up, I hit the mission where I go to the Facemaker and unlock my "Paragon Hero disguise costume" 2nd costume slot. I wanted to make a non-Arachnos costume for her, so I clicked on a Tailor Token in my email box and then went to claim it.

The Character Slot window popped up, except the 2nd slot was the generic male.

So I tried loading up my original costume and saving it to load into the 2nd one. I can't. The 2nd slot is now labeled forever male and, without Super Tailor Access, I can't think of a way to fix this.

And I finished the arc by defeating the three bosses I defeated in the other missions already.

Nothing changed. I had no motivation to stop one part of Malta from fighting itself. Characters I never met were killed off-camera for no apparent reason. Characterization seemed to change mission to mission, even so far as the characters being completely different models. What little characterization there was was generic Malta talk you can see in any of the already existing Malta paper missions. The Rikti involvement had no pay off at all.

If this is really "better than Dr. Graves' arc" to you, I don't know what to say. People in glass houses shouldn't throw stones, especially when they are pretending to be an emperor who has no clothes, I guess.

From this point on, this post alone with be for my critiques, I'll just keep editing it as I go along.

Done with the first mission. The main issues almost every AE arc has are all present. The author has implanted his own creation into an established villain group, effectively finding a way to Mary Sue his own creations for the Malta. The mission itself is not interest. The new villain group are full of Antimatter clones that have the old stand by powers (elec blast/kin? Mixing the most boring part of the Cabal with the most broken part of Tsoo?). And the mission objectives are full of syntax errors. I was told at one point that I had "3 equipment to confiscate."

Edit: And more sloppy syntax errors. "[NPC] Tactical Operative: So, what do you think of the new TItans?"

The first mission could have been interchangeable with any malta themed newspaper mission in the game. I had absolutely no desire to fight the new Malta, so I ended up simply ghosting the objectives. There was no twist or any kind of storytelling to drive me to fight these new "TItans."

Any interaction the character has with Crimson seems to be predicated entirely on the player knowing Crimson's entire backstory. Seems like sloppy characterization in lieu of just making an original character to used an established contact and just reference things that happen in other arcs.

And here's cliched Superhero Story #1, as perfected by Chris Claremont: the villains have brainwashed heroes to fight for them. I hope you liked it all 500 times Chris did it, because there's absolutely nothing new done with this plot device here.

Second mission complete. Standard Steel Canyon outdoor map. No syntax or spelling errors that I caught on first glance, but the story railroads you into aligning yourself with Vanguard soldiers, who Crimson calls in without your consent to fight along with you. If I were a character who found Vanguard as being a bit Fascist and Xenophobic, I'd be pretty pissed that I was forced to cohort with them.

"Indigo has established that the three businesses targetted by the Rikti were definitely giving Malta trouble in their own ways. That's not really important now, though." Oh thanks, Contact. I love being told that the information I found in the last mission isn't important now.

So next mission in the chain is to rescue the brainwashed hero I fought in the last mission. Here is all the characterization I've gotten for her so far: she was brainwashed by Malta. Now she's not. And she was somehow caught by Malta in Oklahoma City? Wow, the world must be pretty horrible since most of the heroes are centered in Rhode Island yet Malta is kidnapping random strays in other states. This hero isn't a character. It's barely a husk of a character. You can't even click on her for any more information or backstory about her. It just tells you she's not brainwashed anymore. Really? I had no idea. And the fact that she's named "Bluehawk Avenger" just completes the overall generic feel of her.

Sample of the stirring dialogue of this arc: "[NPC] Ms. Werner: ohgodohgodohgod!" I know it's not Venture's fault, but this was said by a male NPC. So at least we have some unintentional comedy.

By saving Bluehawk I got a clue entitled "Bluehawk's Story." Maybe this is a chance to provide more characterization and backstory as to why we should care about who she is? Nope. It's a confusing, rambling story about Malta that involves the author abusing the "Malta Names = Numbers" convention. "2-0...the Enigma Silver cell leader...had 6-3 contact the Rikti and set it all up." So I'm facing off against a power so evil it's character is named with random numbers.

And now we've falling back on memes instead of actual storytelling or character dialogue: "6-3 cut her loose?!? That doesn't make sense. Malta never lets their pet supers go...unless it's some kind of trick...nah, this ain't a Nemesis plot."

More unintentional (intentional?) Mary Sue-ing as I zone into the next mission to find the original flavor Malta fighting off against the new Extra Crispy custom version. But since the created characters are so much more awesome (and have better powers) that means I essentially watch the old Malta get slaughtered and the new Mary Sue-Malta stand around over their dead bodies.

What not to do with small tech maps: backlog them with glowie objectives. I just had 3 glowies in one room literally right next to each other. Not that it matters, since 3 of them are body bags, so the writer has used the cheap "dead heroes = important story!" short cut.

And both of the numbered Matla I mentioned earlier were Zeus Titans. Why the hell are Malta letting robots choose to keep hostages, kill them, or let them go?

"This is the body of Alice Kaufmann, one of the supers you were sent to extract. She was a low-grade telepath." Well then. I guess I better be motivated to fight in her honor then because I now know so much more about who she was and why Malta killed her.

As I zone out: "You found a scathing email from Enigma Silver 2-0, which you have time to read after the shooting stops." Giant combat robots have time to write scathing emails? And three superpowered individuals were just killed, but thankfully I have enough time to read an angry missive from a robot!

From the giant robot's e-mail: "You just demoted yourself to...more collateral damage." You can almost hear Steven Seagal say this in a barely awake monotone, can't you?

So now 6-3 is out to get 2-0 and is on a rampage to get him... but I just defeated him. How is the giant robot not in the Zig? Did I let him go out of the kindness of my heart over the dead bodies of super powered individuals I never had a chance to care about? Why would I let murderous giant robots free? Don't look for an explanation, because it's just more in-game memes and continuity jokes in lieu of actually telling a story: "Enigma Silver 6-3 has been trying to stay on the move, but his old boss 2-0 caught up with his forces in Boomtown. They're just never going to get that place rebuilt at this rate."

"Ja'Dar has suited up to bust heads and chew gum...and he didn't bring any gum." Then why would he suit up to chew gum in the first place? If you are going to steal classic Roddy Piper lines, at least use them right.

Hey, remember the very last mission? Where 6-3 and 2-0 were both Zeus Titans that talked like Zeus Titans do in the already established canon of the game? Well now they are the new Mary Sue-brand Titans and an EB-level Gunslinger in this mission and suddenly are EBs instead of bosses. No explanation giving for their transformation in their bios. And their speech patterns are those of regular humans. No reason given again. Lazy storytelling.

Right off the bat I have an issue with the first text from Crimson, the contact for this arc.

I'm playing as a level 50 incarnated rad/thermal corruptor villain, yet Crimson talks to me like he knows me and we have worked together before. We have not. In fact, the last time I met Crimson, it was me blasting his face off in a Recluse Strike Force. This arc should be labeled hero alignment only.

And I'm pre-emptively calling shenanigans on you if you respond to any of my criticisms with "Well my unplayable arcs are better!1111"

Okay, I'm going to go play Blowback right now.

And no, I will be posting my thoughts and opinions on it in this thread. It's not "derailing" the topic anymore than anything else has. You and Sam have already dissected every little nit that could be picked about Dr. Graves arcs, so it's time to jumpstart the thread anyways with a swift change in direction.

Which one do you consider your greatest piece of work? I'll do that one first.

So everytime in this and the TwinShot thread you linked to a Trope as an insult of these arcs, you are now admitting that Not All Tropes Are Bad?

And there was not one point in any of your arcs where I felt like "Oh, this is new and different." This to me means they are cliched and boring and fail their one job of being entertaining. I am willing to re-play them and cite examples of ALL your faults one by one here, though.

I think a good chunk of the original story arcs blueside need at least a revamp.

Ubelmann the Unknown I remember being especially boring outside of the souvenir at the end.