Fallconess

I threw one together in the creator for you using the helm and enforcer 1 chest piece so you'd be with out the symbol, also armored pads chest and legs, bare/smooth- Bands for gloves, techbot boots I think they're called and tech tactical belt; enforcer on the female version.
Male
Female bane spider variant sans helm

Hiyas art forumites. I think the last time I posted anything in here was close to a year ago with my defender, but I've still been sketching and want to see what you all think of the start of my drawing of my dual blade brute, Huntress Hawk, A screenie with some pals. There are a few things that I see I need to fix (her right arm for example), feel free to point out anything you all see.
Thanks,
-Fall

I think she's done (well for now at least)

Waves

ok shameless plug and another update more details and shading face still isn't working *shrugs*

I think you're being way too hard on yourself. Your original piece in this thread is absolutly stunning and you're off to a good start with the second. Earlier you were worried about originality; I for one have a terrible time with proportion and poses so I use photoes as a sarting point.
ie: This was used as reference for this pose
And this was used as a reference for this one
A mirror is also a great tool to help see how the body fits together, as BAS suggested. Keep at it and practise you'll get more comfortable the more you do.

Started adding in a few details; I think she's starting to get there
Updated Fallconess

not elven, although I thought the same thing last night her torso is just too long. always had trouble with faces and I don't think the angle is helping me much either. but Thanks to you both for the differnet perspective.

Thought I'd throw this up here and see what you all think.
It's the start of a sketch of my Defender and namesake.
*deepbreath* Fallconess
Thoughts and critiques more than welcome. I can see a few changes I want to make and a fresh set of eyes is always helpful.