FZeroRacer

I'd love some critique on my arc. I actually made it a fair while back when Architect was first introduced, but recently cleaned it up a tad and republished it.

Arc Title: Tea Time
Arc ID: 382636
Morality: Neutral
Range: 1-54
Length: 3 missions
Synopsis: A group of rather dapper gentlemen have decided to do the worst crime possible: Attempt to control tea time for both villains and heroes alike! If they are not stopped rather fast-like, this could spell the end of (tea) time itself!

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-Testers encourage PlayNC to hurry up and fix the (minor) bugs in these missions and send them to the live servers, because they are awesomely fun.

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You're kidding right? awesomely fun? not even close
Mayhem Missions don’t differ much from a mindless shooter or a hack and slash, all they really are is a bank heist and a cape mission rolled into one…except the only big change is now you can break things (which could be done for the entire game not just select missions).

Mayhem Missions are nothing more than a crumb being handed out to draw in a younger crowd (which seems to be working), older more mature gamers need more than mindless smashing.

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Generalizations for the win! Because clearly younger games cant enjoy puzzles and/or logical problems, and mature gamers cant enjoy a smasher/shooter type of thing.

You may not like it, but dont lump people into catagorys. Mature gamers like smashing stuff just as much as the younger crowd, and vice versa.

What, no villainous monologing?

A villainous laugh kinda goes to waste if you dont have the proper speech to go with it.

Everyone, prepare to duck-and-cover, for an evil worse then the villains of paragon approach..

Legolas clones...

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Kid you not, I use the History channel. Every morning they have some random show on who knows what. I turn it on during breakfast and watch everything from Wild West Technology to World War I politics to Ancient Wonders of the World. It's a random spark to my creativity for the rest of the day.

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Actually, i like to see the history channel sometimes too. Some of the things are actually *gasp* interesting!

My creativity comes mainly from history/words. If i cant think of anything good, i usually turn to history or i start thinking of random words and their meaning.