a bullet fired.hiting one person.that person was betty fryers.mum of a 5 year old baby luke fryers.the bullet went staright into her chest.the gun man looked at luke cowering in fear in the cornner.the sirens of a police car howled in he background.in a very raspy voice said "your lucky kid but wacth your back coz the second your no looking ill been inroducing this bullet in your back".
the police showed up to find luke crying hugging his mums body.the police tried seperating the boy form his mums body he held as hard as he could be he was overpowered.
2 weeks later he heard a scream he ran into his back room where hhe hurd the scream come from.he opened he door and his dad was there hanging from a belt sttuck tto the pipe that ran across the celing.
he was put in a foster family who loved him like he was there own they looked after him until he was 18 with a job and girlfriend.he took a step outt of his house and said "now imm after the men that made me misarble"
3 years later he had trained hard he had a sixpack and big muscles.he went o atlas park and spoke to mrs.liberty he told him that he had to sign up with the city represenative to be classed as a hero.he walked up the steps feeling he was on top of the world
many mounths had passed of fight villains when he got a letter from the man that killed his mum saying to meet him in the hollows at 8:30 PM he spent most of that day at the gym.so at 8:30 he went to the hollows he waited no one came he started walking home when he heard gun fire.the cops guarding the entrance were firing into the air thhe next thing he knew a massive alien type suit 10 foot tall came flying in.luke fryers activated fly he flew up to the glass part of the suit.the man on the other side said "hiya 'member me" the fist of the suit slammed him down into the ground.tthe same fist lifted him up "your weak"said the villain
"so are you" yelled luke.luke repitidley punched him until he punched back lukke dived for his feet rugby tackling him to the ground the suit made no movement luke was shure he was dead.the next day he was clamied as blackflash thee protector oof paragon
the end
in issue 2
a new villains on the block but the vilain has more than anyone could have guesseed
hope you enjoyed soz for any spelling mistakes
