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Not everyone who saw this was creeped out - ...

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- I just prefer an honest, well-thought-out explanation and constructive criticism

Okay, when I watched it, there was definitely a progressive creepiness to start out with. I was indeed intrigued.

I loved how you "transposed" the beauty with the grunge. As if the images of grungy reality were being "replaced" in the mind with ones of peace and serenity. Then of course, the last image of just exactly how that process was occurring... and that last scream. Then... that last phrase....

"They're coming."

And I burst out laughing.
Because, due to the doomity doom all over the forums regarding the inevitable influx of F2P'ers, the whole thing suddenly seemed VERY tongue in cheek.

I know that you started work on this project before the massive paranoia hit here, so my reaction was simply a case of ... timing, I guess.

I think it was very well done. Nice timing with the music. Nice job on the vocals. I can definitely see a progression of improvement with your vids. Keep it up.

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Originally Posted by Impish Kat View Post
Then... that last phrase....

"They're coming."

And I burst out laughing.
Because, due to the doomity doom all over the forums regarding the inevitable influx of F2P'ers, the whole thing suddenly seemed VERY tongue in cheek.

I know that you started work on this project before the massive paranoia hit here, so my reaction was simply a case of ... timing, I guess.

I think it was very well done. Nice timing with the music. Nice job on the vocals. I can definitely see a progression of improvement with your vids. Keep it up.
I wish I could say I had thought of that aspect when I'd started... but I hadn't. And you're right... in retrospect, it makes it damn funny.

And as far as the 'well thought out explanation' thing, that's more for folks who DIDN'T like it and why. Like a discussion Emperor_Steele and I had way back when about the credits on my vids. He was 100% right in his opinion about how I could improve things, and he laid it out in a way that made total sense, plus suggestions on how I could do it. At first I was irked like, "who are you to tell me how to do these things?" but after reading his response, there was nothing I could say but, "yeah, you're right" and make his suggested changes. Which turned out for the best.

Michelle
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Samuraiko/Dark_Respite


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