I've noted that one (or both) of my arcs have recently got some play (since I got AE Tickets out of nowhere) but I've had very little in the way of constructive feedback. This is probably due to the fact the players are US-side and hence feedback might not be reaching my EU-side account.
So, I'd like for a few people to rip my (first) mission to pieces! I want to get back to CoV and write more - but I need to get things down pat first.
So, some details...
Arc ID: 28817
Alignment: Villainous
Target Level: 15+
Title: Arachnos Research and Development: A Security Breach
The premise is based around my VG on Defiant - a R&D team within Arachnos that compete against Dr Aeon, reporting to Black Scorpion. It features a couple of custom groups - ARAD (a mix of standard Arachnos robots, and some custom scientists) and Robots (a mix of all robot NPC's found ingame).
Have a look, see if you enjoy the story - tell me what you don't like! I spruced it up a little yesterday so there shouldn't be any glaring problems, but you tell me
All,
I've noted that one (or both) of my arcs have recently got some play (since I got AE Tickets out of nowhere) but I've had very little in the way of constructive feedback. This is probably due to the fact the players are US-side and hence feedback might not be reaching my EU-side account.
So, I'd like for a few people to rip my (first) mission to pieces! I want to get back to CoV and write more - but I need to get things down pat first.
So, some details...
Arc ID: 28817
Alignment: Villainous
Target Level: 15+
Title: Arachnos Research and Development: A Security Breach
The premise is based around my VG on Defiant - a R&D team within Arachnos that compete against Dr Aeon, reporting to Black Scorpion. It features a couple of custom groups - ARAD (a mix of standard Arachnos robots, and some custom scientists) and Robots (a mix of all robot NPC's found ingame).
Have a look, see if you enjoy the story - tell me what you don't like! I spruced it up a little yesterday so there shouldn't be any glaring problems, but you tell me
Regards,
MZ