Over the past few weeks I've been working with a story arc that I've always had in my mind and now I have the tools to put it out there.
It's an origin story about a villain who used to work for Crey and steals some stuff from them and becomes a villain. It's more in-depth than that and I spent a lot of time working with the story and I'm looking for some feedback on it. I would be much obliged if you guys would go though it and take a look at it. I made it more for story telling, not so much for XP, so please forgive that.
The Arc ID is 423170. It's called X Marks The Spot.
Over the past few weeks I've been working with a story arc that I've always had in my mind and now I have the tools to put it out there.
It's an origin story about a villain who used to work for Crey and steals some stuff from them and becomes a villain. It's more in-depth than that and I spent a lot of time working with the story and I'm looking for some feedback on it. I would be much obliged if you guys would go though it and take a look at it. I made it more for story telling, not so much for XP, so please forgive that.
The Arc ID is 423170. It's called X Marks The Spot.
Thanks! =D