just a few pics from my book any opinions ???
did you just do this on your own or for commission?
art looks good(i'm an artist myself)
clean up the sketchy stuff and color that b*tch in
oh didn't realize it was just random stuff and concept art, still looks good ;P
I'm actually working on a flash animation with a story line etc., if you have any tips for that(putting a story line together) lemme know in PM :>
edit: i think you did a good job showing expression in the faces
edit2: I don't like the font used on the cover (the chronicles part) but I dunno I'm not really into sci-fi and I don't have any suggestions but it just looks kind of boring to me(font).
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The art work is from my book 95000 + words 500 pages (unpublished) I've decided recently to make it a graphic novel. I'd be making 4 graphic novels out of this one book. The art work is from a fan and established artist that does this professionally. (He is an award winning artist from his country 3 times voted best artist in his field.) The pics are just from different sections of the first three chapters and i was looking for all kind of feed back. The genre is military Sci Fi.
The story is a cross between a lot of different events through my life, covering over 30 years of inspirations. primarily the Flying Dutchmen, Starblazers and way too many world war two navy movies to mention.
Appreciate the opinions of the art.
I'm impressed XPP, apparently you can teach an ol' used car salesman new tricks. 
My wife says it needs more scantily clad alien women in it, and we're sold.
No, really, she said that.
yah a few proof readers said that too lol but i'm looking at marketing to an internationl audience so such images might be considered offensive. Sexy women offensive to certain cultures. killing a 100 million people not offensive go figure.
P.S. who is this XPP you speak of ???
WOW! Great work! I can't really critique since I can't do nearly that good of a job! I agree though with others stating go COLOR!!!
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WOW! Great work! I can't really critique since I can't do nearly that good of a job! I agree though with others stating go COLOR!!!
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a few more pics
Excellent work, Halimaw!
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