Hi Agent 717,
I ran into a problem in the second mission that meant I could not go further. I've posted more details in a PM; also a pile of suggestions for further polishing the first two missions.
I like the way you've written the contact. Unfortunately I didn't get far enough into the story to get a sense of where it was going yet.
Cheers, airhead
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Read your PM...I'll definitely make some changes some time tonight.
Thanks for the feedback.
Agent
Agent, I've PM'd you with a long list of feedback!
Good work so far.
Okay...made some more changes to the mish (particularly adding some background info and "redesigned" the second mish)
Thanks again for the feedback!
Hey all,
I'm looking for feedback on a new arc I put up. Let me know your thoughts.
Length: Long (Four missions total...first 2 are short, though)
Morality: Heroic
Enemy Groups: Family, Custom Group
Description: Help Detective Serpico catch a tiny clairvoyant who has recently escaped from prison.
Thanks,
Agent