Hi guys,
I was away from the game for like an year, and now I'm back and having lots of fun with AE. I made 2 arcs during the holidays, and I'd really like some feedback. Since I don't know many ppl ingame, i thought ppl from the forum could help me.
The thing I'm worried the most is the written part, since I'm not a native english speaker. Both arcs are story arcs with custom chars, and I tried to make it as fun as i could. Any feedback will be greatly appreciated!
Here's the arcs:
Arc ID: 359007 Morality: Heroic "The Forbidden Book of the Dead" Starring: B-Movie Scream Queen!
Description: B-Movie Scream Queen is a villain that doesn't want to rule the world. She just want to shape it according to her tastes. That wouldn't be bad if her tastes weren't zombies, eternal nights and horrors beyond any nightmare you could possibly have. Unless you're into Romero's movies, stop her now!
and:
Arc ID: 359823 Morality: Villainous A Life of Crime...
Description:You're working for Bruna Oscura, a mastermind who commands a dangerous organization. She has a few tasks for you, but it won't be easy since such tasks will put you agaisnt the super-hero group known as The Paragon Peacekeepers!
Hi guys,
I was away from the game for like an year, and now I'm back and having lots of fun with AE. I made 2 arcs during the holidays, and I'd really like some feedback. Since I don't know many ppl ingame, i thought ppl from the forum could help me.
The thing I'm worried the most is the written part, since I'm not a native english speaker. Both arcs are story arcs with custom chars, and I tried to make it as fun as i could. Any feedback will be greatly appreciated!
Here's the arcs:
Arc ID: 359007
Morality: Heroic
"The Forbidden Book of the Dead" Starring: B-Movie Scream Queen!
Description: B-Movie Scream Queen is a villain that doesn't want to rule the world. She just want to shape it according to her tastes. That wouldn't be bad if her tastes weren't zombies, eternal nights and horrors beyond any nightmare you could possibly have. Unless you're into Romero's movies, stop her now!
and:
Arc ID: 359823
Morality: Villainous
A Life of Crime...
Description:You're working for Bruna Oscura, a mastermind who commands a dangerous organization. She has a few tasks for you, but it won't be easy since such tasks will put you agaisnt the super-hero group known as The Paragon Peacekeepers!