Chapter 1: Paragon city-1993: Lord Recluse stormed through the door of the reactor room, he knew that he had to hurry, those blasted heroes would arrive soon. "Bring it," he bellowed. Three moaning zombies dragged a cauldron full of water behind them. "You," Recluse yelled a Terra Volta techie,"open the core" The terrified man did as he was told knowing the radiation would kill him. "Pour in the water," the zombies did as they were told, Recluse pushed them into the core. From within his cloak he took a tiny creature and dropped it into the reactor core. The remaining techies screamed in terror as behind the glass the creature changed and grew. As the sound of the door being forced behind them reached Recluse ears he smashed through the glass, grabbed the creature and teleported to his waiting craft. It sped off leaving the baffled heroes trying to contain the core and save the city. If they new what Recluse had done they would have left the city to a kinder fate.
Chapter 2: Rikti Homeworld 1999: The invasion fleet took off soaring towards the dimensional tear. Nr'kon G'rai was proud his father was one of the super-soldiors abord the mothership. As Nr'kon walked away from the launch pads he paused thinking about the fearsome enemy the ships were going to fight in this strange dimension. He felt a small nudge of fear at what these creature may do if they managed to break through. He shook the thought off and continued walking. His habi-shpere was close-by. As he reached his portal he looked back, in the distance he saw the sky patrols above the capital city Nuurdok, he felt safe. He went into his home and thought no more of the distant war.
Chapter 3: Eastgate-1995: Tim Hancock looked out of the windows in his penthouse apartment the view were fantastic. To the north the crnes building new towers and luxury housing on peregrin island. To the east the vauge outline of the statue of atlas was visible between the towers. Just to the south of the the tangle of highways above skyway sit were lit up like shining ribbons in the night. To the eats the ocean sparkled and south of that the bright light of Talos island shone lighting up the water. Five caped heroes suddenly dropped from the sky outside the window Jim watched the arrive on the ground and commence combat. Then he noticed what they were fighting: Trolls. The fire alarm went off and Tim was forced to decide run and face the trolls and stay and face fire. After five minutes watching the combat and seeing no signs of fire in the building Tim went for a drink. As he walked back to the window he saw a massive troll with some thing on his back that looked like...like...a bomb. The troll screamed, the bomb exploded, the building buckled, the world went black.
Okay three chapter in now you have a decision to make just say the number in you comment first to 5 votes wins so shall the location of chapter 4 be;
1. Terra Volta-Jan 2009
2. Deep space-The near future
3. Woodvale-1992
4. Croatoa-2003
5. Grandeville-1995
So go forth and vote my dear heroes and villains
(small note all 5 will become chapters this is just a kinof where they come thing OK have fun.)
Oi you 32 people that have looked at this VOTE!
I ain't voting until I get a better picture of what is actually going on.
3 chapters in, we have no idea what the story is actually about; and the changing times and locations don't help.
By the way, work on your spelling. There's a bit too many spelling mistakes in there.
Yeah I know not my best work, bit bored of this story already think i'll ditch it
ah well i'll be back in a coupla weeks with something new
I started this story in the game carried it on to my sg forums now i'm bringing it here. So please feedback and i'll update as often as possible.