My second drawing - an 'original'

Okay, here goes.
It looked much nicer on paper, before it was scanned in and went all 'funny'.

Here is a new character of mine, Winterstrike. She's a Deviant and this is her fresh-out-of-the-box costume.

I know that her right arm is way too long and her legs could do with trimming down a bit. Apart from that though, I'm quite pleased with my efforts as this was all 'from my head' as opposed to using an existing picture. I hope to add more, including AP herself, in the near future.

I think this is a good sketch. Bare in mind that this is from someone that has trouble drawing stick men. What maybe you could do is put a bit more expression in the face and a bit more of a jazzy pose?