Looks very nice 
The only thing i can really see which looks odd, is her legs, it kinda looks like she's sitting down, but i assume you wanted her to look like she's risig up from the chimney.
Other than that it's a very nice picture, i absolutely adore her face.
I agree with Neko the face is really cute
I love how you have made it look soft! I've often found drawing with pencil looks a bit harsh but you've managed to make the atmosphere really soft 
I agree with Black. Great effect going on with the use of pencils!
Added you to my dA too. 
Catz
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I love how you have made it look soft! I've often found drawing with pencil looks a bit harsh but you've managed to make the atmosphere really soft
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I agree, I'm betting you used a 2B or maybe even 3B pencil and to great effect
Whatever the technique, its nicely atmospheric - be sure to let us see some more of your stuff please.
It's Sylp so tell me what u guys think
just a rough sketch but i wanted some opinions 