the origin of Killfrenzy (comic)

Right, I toyed around a bit with the comicbook-maker and decided to try to make a comic about my main´s origin story.
The pdf-file is 4mb - it´s big, I know)
The file is hosted on badongo.com and it´s a bit complicated to get the file. I´m sorry for that. In the (almost) top right corner you see a countdown (mainly 20 secs). After that, type in the code that appears and you should be fine. Again, I´m sorry for any inconvinience caused by this.
The file is located here .

Please keep in mind, that I´m not a native english speaker, although I tried my best to get rid of any typos

EDIT: Just noticed, some speech-bubbles were too small for it´s containig text. Edited this and uptadet the pdf-file.

A great take on the tutorial storyline, personalising the experience, and the screens you've taken for the comic are well choreographed, at the end of the issue I felt like I knew Mr. Frenzy. Rooks like.

Thank you very much, Rooks

/em praise

Great comic, fun read and excellent use of the tutorial.

P.S, What comic book maker did you use?

thanks, Thorny_Devil

I used the Comic Book Creator from Planetwide Games. Build 1.1.32, full version. You can get a 30 day trial here

Cool, Thx

Nice going. Really enjoyed the comic. Hope theres more to come

Thanks Kev. Maybe there´s more to come... just have to be in the right mood and having a good idea.

Sehr gut gemacht. Hat mich inspiriert