The Manice: Part1 "The face of an enemy

Hiya folks.
I just finished the first part of my screenshot comic ^^
The Download system is a bit wierd. - But just wait a little.. Then there comes this little box, where you have to type the overstanding letters, and then you download ^^

The Manice: The face of an enemy part 1

Do you mind type what you think?
And btw, sorry about the "to be continued" :/ i just ran out of ideas. Please feel free to write, if you got some

(P.S. "Tegneserie" means cartoon or Comic on danish.. Just so you dont think its a virus or anything)

/Manice