Captain Patriot #1: A Haunted Past pt1

We as promised here is the first part of my comic script for my ongoing Captain Patriot comic idea. What makes a great superhero... his arch nemesis of course. I've already given Cpt Patriot a very WWII spacific origin and needed a sutable villain to match him... Introducing General Bismarck.

If you want to get a scence for both characters feel free to read their origins first:

Captain Patriot Origin
General Bismarck Origin

Right on with the main script, this is my first stab at publicly distributing my scripts and would love to know what you think. Its also in PDF format as trying to format the script onto the forum pages has been a nightmare

Captain Patriot #1: A Haunted Past

enjoy!