The art keeps coming...
That ones pretty tight man!! I like the 3D gun!
I still gotta draw her hand in holding it, but I haven't figured out the proper placement yet.
Updated. Kinda stuck now, though. I'm not sure what else I can do with it. Also, I feel like her mouth is too small.
This is for me. I rarely do experiments for commissions, and only sometimes for freebies.
There's too much chance of EXPLOSION.
The mouth is sized fine but I think the bottom lip needs to be a little fuller. The gun is set in slightly from the shoulder so the angle is a little off, i think that's why the grip may be giving you trouble. The muzzle should be angled in (toward the center of the piece) slightly to make her arm fit better. If you keep it in the same place relative to the shoulder, if you slide it out towards the edge while keeping the "head on" angle it should fit better.
not that you were asking my opinion or nothing...heh heh *wrings hands*
Roxy On DA...Finally!
Very cool piece Foo, I love the colors! I wouldn't say that her mouth is too small just that it curves in too deeply on her right side. It appears that the line of her right cheek leading to her chin is in shadow but the curve of her lip doesn't follow the contour of her face in that area.
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Here's a WIP for FoxRox from Caemgen's contest:
WOAH! Nice action piece, FOO!! I am looking forward to seeing the completed version!
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Her lips are thin compared to what we normally see in hero art, but not incorrect. I like the gun too. Not sure what else you'd want to do with it. It looks pretty finished
Her shoe is untied... Never a good idea to go into battle with untied shoes!
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and here's the final! So Happy my first true piece of art and foo didn't even kill me or nothing!
Roxy On DA...Finally!
Not quite! Here's the final version!! I forgot her punk make up!
Really nice work, Foo.
I like how the diagonal lines help give the piece a sense of downward movement.
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I stole them from anime! (I got a heavy anime feel from the character.)
Another one, not even seen by the participants yet:
Fenian Hex!
Nice. =)
Woohoo! Very cool!! And Fenian is obviously about to mess Hex up! (cause we all know bad girls never win...)
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Left a comment on DA, but it bears repeating. I love it! Thanks Foo, and thanks Caemgen for putting on the contest in the first place.
Ya never know, Fen might just let her off with a spanking Besides, Fenian isn't all that confident... Against another super she'd be satisfied with just chasing them out of her neighborhood.
And no thanks needed for the contest, it was my pleasure. Fun to run plus a good way to sucker people into letting me use their characters
Glad you two like it.
Here's something else I just finished.
Black Stiletto
Now to bed.
Nice work Foo, I'm really liking these latest pieces from you... just been far too busy to really look them over in detail and comment.
One small thing I noticed though it looks like Hex's right hand is in two places at the same time? Pose changed perhaps but forgot to erase the other layer?
Otherwise great... oh and I'm all for the spanking if there's pics involved.
Ha! You're right. That was dumb.
Fixed!
I stole them from anime! (I got a heavy anime feel from the character.)
Another one, not even seen by the participants yet: Fenian Hex! |
I still have to add detail to the piece, and some sort of background, probably. Right now, I've only detailed her hair and eye.