Arc 244484: If you teach a man to make a fish
By
airhead,
Posted on: 2009-06-30 22:58 in Mission Architect
Nice arc, very short, seems like the introduction to something huge! Nonetheless, it's complete, and fun and easy to play.
The power armour under the lab coat is a great touch. All the glowies in the last room was nice too.
Some very minor thoughts below. Cheers, airhead
When I arrive, I hear rallying cries of the Scrapyarders. Surely they don't know I'm here. Perhaps ... of the Scrapyarders at work.?
It said I'd taken the Scrapyarder's grisly trophy - does it still have flesh on it? Sharks' teeth typically don't.
Mission 2 return: endevor -> endeavor (or English-English: endeavour)
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Thanks for the notes; I totally missed the endevor/endeavor thing.
Yes, Mako's tooth has some dried gum flesh attached to it. The idea being, it was knocked out of his head by Scrapyard, rather than coming loose naturally.
And good thought about the mission 1 entry pop-up. I changed it to reflect the fact that the Scrapyarders shouldn't be ready, and would just be working.
This was the first arc I made after I14 went Live; it was reviewed by several of the resident Arc reviewers, and has now been updated, to incorporate those changes (albeit, there's been a large gap between this update and those reviews), and for I15.
The arc centers around Dr. Barlow and the UN-run GENE Project, which wants to mass produce clones of Captain Mako for use as a super-soldier, and Dr. Barlow hires your villain to "help out".
I didn't quite know what I was doing, and I accidentally unpublished, and then published again, rather than just re-publishing. I'd love some feedback and ratings to bring me out of the limbo that is "No Ratings".