Arc #242869 -- "The Wolfpack Chronicles (Part 1)"
By
Citizen_Razor,
Posted on: 2009-06-29 21:52 in Mission Architect
Made some minor changes to this arc ... namely, I fixed the souvenir clue that you get when you complete the arc. I had originally posted the arc on test, and somebody played through it and gave some feedback. I then made some minor changes to the arc based on the feedback ... but I forgot to reflect those changes in the final souvenir clue. D'OH! Well I went back and fixed that.
Soloed through the arc on Difficulty Level 1 with my Lv11 / 12 Spines/Willpower Stalker. Was able to complete the arc without any deaths. Granted, it *is* a Stalker, which is ideally suited for solo play, but he didn't have Placate yet and was able to stand up to the various enemies.
I pimped the arc on the "MA Arc Finder" global chat, and got a few bites. With apologizes to PW, here's the feedback.
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Well done, I had a lot of fun on this arc. Liked the Horsemen reskin as I mentioned, and I liked how you used patrols and Alpha's ambushes. Omega was quite contemptuous of every one (especially Azuria, loved that), making it feel very villainous. Tying the 5 factions into the origins was very clever. (Found a minor typo at the start of mish 2 (buffon instead of buffoon)). 5 stars!
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Typo has been corrected. I deliberately made Omega contemptuous of everybody except you, the player. Although I like most of the CoV arcs, one of the biggest gripes I have with many CoV contacts is how they treat you like a lackey. I tried to have Omega treat the player with respect. I hope that came through.
BTW, the Horsemen reskin mentioned above refers to my recoloring of Longbow agents. I changed their color schemes. The Horsemen is a subgroup of the Freedom Corps (like the Longbow is) dedicated to monitoring Praetoria.
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Very well done. I enjoyed the story and map design. Worked great with lowbies, and that can be hard to find in the MA!
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This is a great lowbie level mission. I had fun running it with a stalker! Looking forward to the next one.
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That's all the feedback I have for now. Please do check the arc out. :-)
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Now that Issue 15 is here, I can finally publish the first part of "The Wolfpack Chronicles," the villainous counterpart to "The Horsemen Chronicles."
Here's the description:
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Tyrant wants to open a permanent portal into the Rogue Isles, but he can't do it without your help. Collect the five artifacts needed to establish a permanent connection between Praetoria and the Rogue Isles.
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This story arc is intended for Lv10-14 villains. As always, I am looking for feedback and constructive criticism.
The arc ID is #242869.
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