Named boss might mention own name in speech, else 'Barclay' with nothing else seems too left alone.
Nice to see some new caves
M2,Intro: got->gotten. M2,Extro: them->him
M3: Archivist - same comment about name as Barclay, also - ambush did I see *both* spider and longbow or was that a patrol that mingled?
M4, Intro: He hasn't really "beaten me" more like "beaten me to it" since there should be no mention of us actually clashing.
It's a good engaging dialog tho' since it actually hurt my feelings
a little that she thought I can't handle this Hogun-dude.. until I
thought "Hey wait a moment!".
[EB-name not listed to avoid spoilers] really has it bad for [Named Hero], still babbling about him when *I* beat him down.
Longbow ambush (spawned at kidnap) just waited near entrance,
intentional (ok, since I had a lot of patrols still)?
Chestpounding Wallace, a lil' over the top
Extro: Thoughout-> Throughout.
Good you don't force the choice upon people about Wallace, but only mention that "they made it and now go to test project"
M5, Intro: o -> off. Very good to wrote just defeat XXX leader, no need to foreshadow details of the bad news to come - keeps anxiety up.
Does [EB-name withheld] really talk like that - he's like ... a dorky version of Batman (I guess he is though!)
Extro: To wipe a tear -> To wipe off a tear (not "away" since there's another "away" coming later)
General: Nice concept, nice build-up through the missions.
Run as L40 Inv.Tank/Diff.1 - Main threat.. take down energy drainers first - then psionics. Beating up the featured EB's: Always fun solo - go go insp & Temp Powers.
5 Stars!
//AtCbM// www.crystalblue.dk
Victory - Mare,Dagger of Pain,Keep,Hogun and Bloodpetal
The Keep-Arcs: 164260, 188373, 192610, 196090 and funny side-chapter 218575.
Mender-Arc: 266163
Wanted to PM this but not sure I can (he's EU)
M1,Intro: Lets->Let's.
Named boss might mention own name in speech, else 'Barclay' with nothing else seems too left alone.
Nice to see some new caves
M2,Intro: got->gotten. M2,Extro: them->him
M3: Archivist - same comment about name as Barclay, also - ambush did I see *both* spider and longbow or was that a patrol that mingled?
M4, Intro: He hasn't really "beaten me" more like "beaten me to it" since there should be no mention of us actually clashing.
It's a good engaging dialog tho' since it actually hurt my feelings
a little that she thought I can't handle this Hogun-dude.. until I
thought "Hey wait a moment!".
[EB-name not listed to avoid spoilers] really has it bad for [Named Hero], still babbling about him when *I* beat him down.
Longbow ambush (spawned at kidnap) just waited near entrance,
intentional (ok, since I had a lot of patrols still)?
Chestpounding Wallace, a lil' over the top
Extro: Thoughout-> Throughout.
Good you don't force the choice upon people about Wallace, but only mention that "they made it and now go to test project"
M5, Intro: o -> off. Very good to wrote just defeat XXX leader, no need to foreshadow details of the bad news to come - keeps anxiety up.
Does [EB-name withheld] really talk like that - he's like ... a dorky version of Batman (I guess he is though!)
Extro: To wipe a tear -> To wipe off a tear (not "away" since there's another "away" coming later)
General: Nice concept, nice build-up through the missions.
Run as L40 Inv.Tank/Diff.1 - Main threat.. take down energy drainers first - then psionics. Beating up the featured EB's: Always fun solo - go go insp & Temp Powers.
5 Stars!
//AtCbM// www.crystalblue.dk
Victory - Mare,Dagger of Pain,Keep,Hogun and Bloodpetal
The Keep-Arcs: 164260, 188373, 192610, 196090 and funny side-chapter 218575.
Mender-Arc: 266163