Fjord Devil - lines for WIP

Just the lines for Fjord Devil, my salute to Norway. I encourage any commentary.

You really have improved! Nice musculature you've got going there. The only thing I notice is that perhaps the calves/feet are too small(?) By feet, I mean the length of them, although that could just be because of the angle.

Thanks LR! Yeah, I kept trying to decide to leave or lengthen them. The angle made it hard to decide.

Two spots for quick improvment:

On the farther axe blade along the edges that are not the blade, add a second line adjacent to the first and tapering towards the other as it approaches the blade - this will give the axehead a sense of thickness.

Pick one side as the where the light is comming from. Make all the lines that are 'facing away' from the light about 50-100% thinker. Adding line wieght will give a more definite sense of three-dimensionality to the image.

Thanks, Morgen. That line idea is something I've never thought of! Also, quick touch-up on the axe, on it!

The final colored version can be seen Here.!