i'm certainly no expert but something looks funny in the alignment of the [Censored] to hips
I think you should lower her right hip(left) so it is proportional and her back or stomach needs to curve some. Otherwise it looks great so far. 
Crestent lvl 50 Mind/Emp Controller http://i125.photobucket.com/albums/p...cGallary-1.jpg
http://crestent.deviantart.com/
http://www.creyindustries.com/viewhero.php?id=21809
maybe it's just on my end, but i can barely see the sketch, it's almost all white space in the image, lines are too faint
Liberty
My 50s:
Hero: Armor Assassin (scrapper), Cross Dresser (scrapper), Surly Seaman (blaster), Defensive End (Tank), Rad Rhino (Cont)
Villain: Beast Infection (Corr), Sweet Zombie Jesus (MM), Milk Weasel (Stalker), Orgullo (MM), Agent Eris (Crab)
Her right arm (the raise hand one) seems too small.
feet seem a little too wide, should be daintier
Liberty
My 50s:
Hero: Armor Assassin (scrapper), Cross Dresser (scrapper), Surly Seaman (blaster), Defensive End (Tank), Rad Rhino (Cont)
Villain: Beast Infection (Corr), Sweet Zombie Jesus (MM), Milk Weasel (Stalker), Orgullo (MM), Agent Eris (Crab)
WIP
As the title says, any help is much appreciated