Niiiiiice layout.
I love to see backgrounds with action in them. 
Thanks for the feedback. I can't bring myself to draw a character against nothing or a simple background. I have to have some sort of... something else happening. Maybe it's because I'm a writer. Maybe it's because I have a short attentions spa- hey look! A rock!
Any more feedback is appreciated.
Whoa whoa whoa...is that the giant mech man from the Striga TF?!
This is automatic win! 
I know from experience how hard buckles are to do, especially multiple buckles all over the place. You've done a great job.
I'd hate to see him in miniature figure form, though. Then I'd be cursing every single buckle as I picked them out with my brush.
"If I fail, they write me off as another statistic. If I succeed, they pay me a million bucks to fly out to Hollywood and fart." --- George A. Romero
"If I had any dignity, that would have been humiliating" --- Adam Savage
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Looking good so far. I, too, love a detailed background. It's so great when a picture tells a story.
Thanks. It is supposed to be something like the robot from the striga TF. That was my inspiration, but I can't remember how he looked. So I just put a 50's robot style on the parts I couldn't remember.
And yes, the buckles were by far the most frustrating part.
Got myself some art supplies. Good pencils, erasers, and paper make a world of difference. Unfortunately my sketch pad doesn't fit on my tiny scanner so there is a shadow problem. Damn 3rd dimension! Anyway, here it is.
Preparing to join the battle.
That is my main, Blood Wolffe. Minus the goggles. I needed the practice on eyes.