I need your creative minds.


Lazzarrus

 

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I have a MA/Regen, and I need your help trying to figure out where I am going to go next with his costumes. For those who need it here is his backstory.

Surazzal aka Christian Reed :


At the age 3 both of his parents were mudered and he was put up for adoption. He was adopted by a Crey researcher who perfom test on him to make him one day a Paragon Protector and his meal ticket. By age 7 he stronger then a professional wieghtlifter and faster than a track star. The researcher gave a detail report to the higher ups at Crey Industries on his son's progress. They promoted him and made him the top researcher for the Protector Research Program.

Christian became property of Crey Industries. They force him to fight their best to monitor his progress. He killed or seriously injured everyone came before him. At 12, while on a jog around the complex he notice a child around his age playing outside. This was the first time in years he seen another child. He begin to play with her then without warning guards quickly surround him. At that point he realized that he was never to be treated as nothing more than research. He tried to escape only to be beaten nearly to death but not before taking out 50 guards.

He was confined to a cell and forgoten about. One day a by the name of Lazzarus raided the complex where he was being held. He was freed by the hero and together they fought thier way out. They continued to work together off and on but Christian wanted to find his birth parents because his powers continued to grow. He believed that they must have been heroes or something that why the experiment didn't kill him. He took on the name Surazzal as a show of respect for the hero who save his life and gave him purpose.

I like the costumes that he has but they are a show of admiration for Lazzarus. Not to mention that they go back and forward teaming up with each other. But I want him to grow independently without much influence of Lazz. The other thing I would like to point out is that I want one costumes to maybe mock the Paragon Protector b/c that a part of the character story. He hates them. But I am looking for him to be somewhat a dark hero. Like his backstory suggest. I look forwad to seeing your screenshot of your vision of where I should go with this. Thanking you in Advance.


 

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I dont know I mention screenshots. That the only way i would be able to see what you came up with.


 

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this statement is for those who are browsing through my post. Any comment would be good if you are not able to post a pic. As now 26 ppl have view this post. If you are going to work on just leave me a post saying so. Give me comment on the story or the screenshot I posted. Just don't just look at and say "Hmm". I post on everything that I view even if it nothing more than me saying good job. I need some kind of input from you guys.

Thanking you again

Lazzarus


 

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Not sure what your wanting man and demanding people to post in your thread doesn't get ya posts just so ya know!


Well I guess ya got mine huh? lol


Seriously what are you going on about? You need help with the costumes? The Story? Another version of the costumes? I'm lost!


 

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I have a MA/Regen, and I need your help trying to figure out where I am going to go next with his costumes. For those who need it here is his backstory.


[/ QUOTE ] I am not trying to demanding but I don't have to force any to let me draw their toon. But it makes no sense for so many ppl to have viewed my post and said nothing. But I know I could always depend on you TA. You are one of the nicest people on this forum. Everytime I post something you always have a comment even if it's nothing more Good job. I was just getting a little heated but now I am just amused.


 

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Well man I can't get ingame and havn't been able to for a while now so I couldn't help ya in that vein anyways but I will say as far as the story goes I think those costumes look good in going with it.


I get amused by these threads too btw!


 

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Thank you soo much for your comment. You a very nice man and you have calm down the beast rising within.


 

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Ok, I can't help you costume wise. Many of my alts tend to look like they got dressed in the dark.
However, if you *really* want some help on your backstory, I can crit and edit it for you. Just to polish it up a little if you want.
Let me know.


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That would be cool and I would appreciate it.


 

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I don't know, dude. These types of threads are always hard because you are asking us to think for you and do the work to boot. It's hard enough to think for myself.

If you just need a nudge in a creative direction, maybe I can help.

As I understand it, your hero is undergoing a transformation. He's learning who he is and slowly learning to stand on his own, away from his mentor.

How about something really simple to remind him to pursue his identity? Something like a yellow sash of remembrance around his waist? Or some other token that he can wear to remind him of his roots/destiny?

Good luck to you!

Ultimately, you will get it figured out.


 

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Wow! That's a good Idea. I am not asking for the world and reguardless the finally decision of what i take and throw away is on me. But you have a great grasp on my toon. Kudos to you.


 

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cool ty


 

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I took what you did and I got this Surazzal's Paragon Protector Prototype Uniform. Thank you again now I can focus on his Ultimate and Final Customs. I am Using this as his first costume. He just need his signature costume. The one that sets him apart from the PP and Lazz.


 

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Oo, I really like that!!


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That's a nice costume!

Good job!