Hey TA!*dangles bell* Free art! Come get it! (WIP)

Congrats on getting him to 50 TA!

AoT Pencils

Comments? Critiques? Suggestions?

looks good Far.

in regards to critique...ermm...not much to say. its a fine piece as is...the question is whether you are trying to accomplish something else with it. as it stands now in pencils...I would say its time to ink them color ~

I want to get a background in there maybe.

All to often I negelect a background in my pieces.
Anyone have any suggestions for that?

again I say...depends on what your trying to accomplish with the piece. as it is a headshot...I would actually say a background is not really needed...or at the very least keep it extremely simple so as not to take away from the portrait. just my opinion though....and since people want to apparently beat me up...well...grain of salt as always ~

Hmmm how's about a nice full moon in the back. Or maybe a quarter moon.

Some kinda moon and cloud combo perhaps...

you could do the clouded moon action...that would work.~

I think you should curve the left (to our left) cheekbone a little bit more. It seems a bit edgy.

Good nonetheless.

I changed the cheekbone abit.

Opinions on which is better.
AoT WIP Cheek fix
Original

I think the new one makes him look emaciated which is good.

Sorry if I wasn't clear--I meant this part (circled).

Well I'm an idiot lol.

I'll try to fix it again, and I'll add the background in for this on too.

Maybe that's better?

What does everyone think?

Oooh I like that man!!



Sorry, been away for a while and just got my puter back!!


Thanks man!

Ha It's cool. I promised it to you awhile back on the MMOART forums. Figured I should get to it.