It's a style thing - those are my 'quick lips' when I'm thinking in end terms of color vs. inks.
Something Bob has been chiding me about <_<
So no, I agree, but it's too late to change that at this point - I can add some definition, as intended, via the colors 
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Oh and I won't get to finish this piece until tomorrow. I will not be in the studio today - have a big test tomorrow in one of my classes! But...
I WILL BE INGAME THIS EVENING :O :O :O DUN DUN DUUUUN!
-after my manicure/pedicure appointment, dropping off drycleaning, and things of the like XD
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Ingame, what time in the est range and with what charachter?
Might be able to make it
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That is a very good picture Star.
I really like the style of it, and as it is I really dont think it should be coloured (its simply great in B&W)
I only have one small point of critique (please dont hurt me)
The lips looks a little off. Sort of like they are put on. Hard to tell what i mean , but perhaps you get it.
Hugs Poul