The Making of Wind Of Mind (first char background)
By
Blood_Wolffe,
Posted on: 2005-06-13 15:00 in Roleplaying
((Thanks for everyones ideas on it <slams head into keyboard>
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"NO....No clowns" - Positron
50s: Smasha (SS/SD Brute), House Rules (Mind/Thorn Dom), Wind of Mind (Illusion/Storm Controller), Coraxa (Kat/Inv Scrapper), Summer's Dream (Fortunata)
It definately has potential. It just needs to be panned out more. For a bio background it is good though. Is there going to be more?
It is just a bio background. i am mad it won't fit on my ID. I would write more but I am not the best at story telling.
"NO....No clowns" - Positron
50s: Smasha (SS/SD Brute), House Rules (Mind/Thorn Dom), Wind of Mind (Illusion/Storm Controller), Coraxa (Kat/Inv Scrapper), Summer's Dream (Fortunata)
The way I look at bio backgrounds for the ID is I write it as it would be written by an official ID card place. Because to me it is your electronic ID card. The boards are for the stories.
Wind Of Mind
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Real name: Jazmine Ukens
Hair color: Black
Skin color: Skin is covered in black fur
Eyes: Green
Background: When Jaz was young, she didn't have the best childhood that she deserved, lived in poverty, no mother, alot of unwanted attention from her step-father. Because she was beaten and taken advantage of every night, her grades plummeted and she was often made fun of. One day on her way home from school she decided to end it all. She walked into an alley and wrote a suicide note which she pinned to her chest with a hair pin. She looked around for any sharp object and found a rusty old knife behind a dumpster, which she took and quickly slashed her left wrist with. Jaz was amazed as she felt very little pain and power that swept through her body like a tidal wave. As Jaz watched, the wrist she had slashed was healed but left an ugly scar where it had cut her skin. She sat in that alley for an hour marveling at the scar on her wrist. After realizing it was starting to get dark she tossed the knife into her backpack and ran home, completly unaware of her new powers. She got home quickly and walked into her apartment to find her step-father passed out on the couch, beer cans littered around him. Jaz was filled with disgust and wished her step-father would get out of her life. As she wished this, her father awoke and a a black jaguar appeared in a puff of dark-purple smoke beside the couch which the drunken lay. The man screamed like a little girl and ran out of the house quickly. Jaz was amazingly unafraid of the jaguar as is walked over and rubbed against her legs. She then understood what she could be, shen could become a superhero! She didn't sleep at all that night, instead she stayed in her barren room practicing her powers alongside her jaguar which she named Minja although she has never heard of that name.
Years later, she sat hunched in an office building with unconcious Nazis littered around her. Under her watchful eyes was a bomb which she was trying to diffuse with the same knife that granted her her powers. She paused and glanced at the timer....20 seconds left.... she wiped sweat from her brow and quickly cut a wire hoping it was the right one and sighed with relief as the timer stopped on 00:00:18. And then it exploded, her knife torn from her hand, her unconsious body was thrown out a window behind her narrowly escaping the quickly collapsing building.
She woke up aching with a huge burning sensating in her chest and her body felt like she was being poked with a billion tiny needles, similar to the sensation your arm being woken up. She looked down her body top see that her clothes were burned off and the enchanted knife sticking out of her chest. And, she now had fur! including a tail to boot. She fainted again and woke up in the hospital a complete cat person, jaguar to be exact, her fur identical to her jaguar....the rest is history.
She hasn't seen her step-father since that life-changing day and she still carries the knife that gave her her powers and body.
((criticism is appreciated, this is the first actual 'real' background i have written up so don't be too harsh.
"NO....No clowns" - Positron
50s: Smasha (SS/SD Brute), House Rules (Mind/Thorn Dom), Wind of Mind (Illusion/Storm Controller), Coraxa (Kat/Inv Scrapper), Summer's Dream (Fortunata)