Sorry to bump this, but I was kind of hoping to get an opinion on my writing... 
I'm glad you did bump it. I enjoyed it. Your story flowed well, I like the way you played to heroism. Maybe I'll get a chance to meet up with you Tripwire. Thanks for the good story.
American Valor
Main Liberty,
all Servers
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by Star Ranger 4 WIN LOSE OR DRAW, WE WILL FIGHT. WE ARE HEROES This is what we DO! |
Decide that this will be another day in which you Walk The Talk.
MA #14724 Operation: Discredit @American Valor
Sentinel Of Liberty SG
I wrote this backstory for one of my characters, Tripwire:
The True Heroes