Tahlana

I had someone 0 star grief mine too, so I bumped your arc to the top of my "to-play" list to balance out the star-karma I'll be sure to send you feedback too!!

EDIT:

Well, I wasn't planning on this, but I enjoyed the Arc a lot so here's my detailed review/feedback:

It was a well written with a well constructed story and motivation. Very evil, military sci-fi plot with great space ship battles...wait CoH can't do space ship combat and I had to use my imagination oh well, still great!

While I personally felt really bad for the Arusians and the Azeri, my character (who is thoroughly evil) enjoyed the merciless, militaristic evilness. You did good at making the player (Federation) evil through action and ethnocentric war and intentions. Good job making the player understand the backstory and feel a part of the war without devolving into too much exposition. I liked that the human fleet is all white and shinning and the flagship is the "Lux" (made me snicker every time) and yet they're xenocidal maniacs. Now make a heroic arc where we can play rogue humans helping the Azeri Alliance take down the Earth Fererdation

I found only 3 typos. In the mission 3 into it says "away team managed TO plot" the word "to" is missing. And I think there are too many commas in Aru Security Officer Info text. And in mission 5 Dr. Sing's info says "Dr. Crow."

The clues were good, the missions were well designed and the maps well chosen. You might want to add Mission titles just to keep in line with the general style of CoH missions though by the end I didn't really mind. Maybe if they're set apart with either color or scale so they don't interrupt the narrative?

The custom aliens had cool looks and power designs. The Azeri MSRs were really challenging.

I liked the actions as the mission accept text. Nice touch.

The 4th map was a bit hard to find the glowies in but nice choice of tileset. This is a nitpick, but in the first mission I wasn't sure why the Aru were in the caves, maybe a throw away line a patrol says like "The civilians are fleeing through the escape tunnels" or "bomb shelter" or something similar? Don't change the map, I liked that! There might not be a way to control it, but in Mission 2 one of the shield power reactors showed up in the caves rather than the base.

Mission 3: loved the civilian "patrols" really added to the atmosphere and made it feel like a decimated city.

Mission 5: Something made all the marines into Elite Boss Admiral Ayala. Not sure what would make a Battle spawn EBs, but maybe make her a person so she can never be spawned accidentally? Whatever the marines were supposed to be, it'd be cool if they were weak enough not to survive with out the player's help.

Overall, 5 stars *****! Really enjoyed it, good job!

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Horror to Puzzles/Riddles

I have had to split up the list in order to post a revision, otherwise, I get an error. This is now in two parts.

Horror
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Astoria in D Minor (41565) -- Heroic
Dark Dreams (3615)
D!E COUNT DADDY MACULA D!E! (10619) -- Heroic (1970's Action/Horror)
Don't Play With The Dead (31813) -- Neutral
The Amulet of J'gara (1709) -- Heroic
Project: Perilous - Into the Chthonian Pit (#3586) - Neutral (Unless you happen to be a mad cultist, in which case, go nuts!)
Small Fears -- Heroic
Lights, Camera, Scream! (#68627) - 3 Mission arc that get's you into the B-Horror film circuit.
Duality --Heroic -- 84105
Hunting the Hunters --Villainous -- 93362 - Help a vampire find out who is hunting his people
Creepy Crawlers - Arc ID: 82553 (Lv 41 - 52, a short, solo-friendly ghost story. Best played alone.)
I Will Dance On Your Grave - Arc ID 92630 – Any level, no EBs or AVs, Voodoo, Necromancy
Movie Monster Madness.. - 102058
Something Comes to Yarmouth(58812) - Heroic, levels 25+ (masearch link)
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The Zombie Apocalypse Task Force: Something wicked this way comes.


Large-Scale Crisis
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Alpha and Omega (60015) -- Heroic
Is it Live or is it Memory-X - Arc ID #70210 - Heroic
This Is War, Part I - the Revenge of Hro'Dtohz -- Neutral
Win the Past, Own the Future - Heroic
A Warrior's Friend - Heroic
The Clockwork War -- Heroic (18672)
Flight of the Valkyries - Precursor (20272) -- Neutral
War of the Worlds - The Anakim Invasion - Part 1, Neutral (15006)
http://boards.cityofheroes.com/showflat....ue#Post13304513
War of the Worlds - The Anakim Invasion - Part 2, The Terran Revolt, Neutral (46711)
url=http://boards.cityofheroes.com/showflat.php?Cat=0&Number=13304455&an=0&am p;page=0#Post13304455
Bleed the Freak - Arc ID #6919 - Heroic
The All-Seeing Eye - Arc ID #57352 - Heroic [SFMA, Soloable, No EB/AVs, Auto-SK to 30/41)
*

Magic
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The Magical Miss Fitz (5079) -- Heroic
Chains of Blood (5492) -- Heroic
A Deal with Destiny -- Heroic
The Broken Chain (82378) -- heroic
Croatoa's Great War: The Parfait Family Reunion -- Neutral -- 71880
Rex is Missing! - Heroic - 51702
The Tannhäuser Gate (Arc 96322)
I Will Dance On Your Grave - Arc ID 92630 – Any level, no EBs or AVs, Voodoo, Necromancy
Deal with The Devil's Pawn Heroic (#113615)
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Military
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Redoubt Operations #1: Fires over Kalago -- Heroic
Red Typhoon (Arc 4912) -- Heroic
Whitehawks (Arc 49364) -- Heroic
Axis and Allies -- Villainous (1379)
Vanguard AQUA (58475) -- Neutral
Wings of Deception, 101926
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Misc. Adventure
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Impossible Kung Fu Mission -- Nuetral (111367)
The Portal Bandits (3326) -- Heroic
A Glitch in the Wyre- Arc 73197-- Neutral (Fun for both the good kids and the bad kids too!)
The Council Cargo - Arc ID: 36951 (Heroic, Lv 26 - 31, solo or team)
Hero Therapy! (TM) - 119228
The Second Coming of the Mega Mech - Heroic (122274)
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Mystery
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Blowback (18575) -- Heroic
Dream Paper -- Heroic (13030)
Dream Paper 2: Restless Sleep -- Heroic (16797)
Dream Paper 3: Broken Dreams -- Heroic (13064)
Hunter of Beasts: It begins with a riot... Arc ID: 110465 - Heroic
Females for Hire - Neutral (Heroic and/or Mercenary motivations) (110723)
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Mythology
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Atlantis Attacks! -- Neutral (30898) -- Click for Promotional Poster
The Seelie War -- Heroic
The Unseelie War -- Villainous
[b] The Seeds of Yggdrasil[b/] -- heroic
Tales of Cimerora, volume 1 : Of feathers and fur -- Heroic
The Aegis Affair - Heroic - **** - 16376
Witches and Warriors (53006)- Heroic
Rites of the Maenads (61159) - Heroic
The Parable of the Fruit Salad -- Heroic -- 65369
The Eye of Balor (88176) - Heroic
Madness And The Minotaur - Neutral - 90124
The Four Treasures of the Tuatha De Danaan - #164100 - Heroic
*

Nemesis Plots
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Brass Reaver: Part 1 -- Neutral
The Handbag Plot -- Heroicish -- 36414
Rise and Fall of the Iron General -- Heroic -- 142200
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Player-Chosen Outcome
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Hunting the Dark Dragon -- Heroic
Playing Gods -- Heroic (51106)
Time's Maelstrom -- Heroic #147296
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Public Domain Characters/Literature
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The Praetorian Invasion of the Land of Oz - Heroic (Contains at least one AV on each mission. Last mission has 3 (but with two helper EBs)
*

Sci-Fi
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Above Mars - Part 1: The Wellington -- Neutral (13215)
Adventures of the Space Marines -- Neutral
Adventures of the Space Marines 2 -- Neutral
The Adventures of the United Earth Rangers -- Neutral (29549)
The Continuing Adventures of the United Earth Rangers -- Neutral (70237)
The Final Nemesis
The Fracturing of Time -- Heroic (171031)
The Knights of Rularuu -- Heroic (75386)
[color= #bbff88]Reach for the Stars -- Neutral (78904) [/color]
Spaced Invaders --Heroic(56856)
That Mysterious Buzzing Sound - 12774
The Balance of Power - 26931 - Neutral
welcome to donut world - 1233 heroic
City of the Apes - 171184 Heroic
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Un-themed Survival/AV/Time Challenges
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The Meatgrinder -- Neutral
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Puzzles/Riddles
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Grim Riddles (#1396) - Heroic
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I'd like to toss mine up here too. Its a sci-fi story with custom factions, no defeat all, no EBs and no AVs. Its solo friendly (I'd recommend level 20 up) and takes about an hour or so to finish.
Any feedback or thoughts about the story, difficulty, maps, clues, etc. would be appreciated!

Arc Name: The Fracturing of Time
Arc ID: 171031
Arc Description: A mysterious entity has sought you out to help save a doomed world. When all goes awry, it is your task to repair the Fractures forming in Time but to do that you must first confront yourself.