StaticThunder

Well of course Elec/Elec Blaster StaticThunder is always fun to practice with.

I have posted all that he has so far. We are trying to convert that into comic boxes. I am trying to stay true to his intent so he isn't accepting some of my offerings so the process is taking longer.

Hope to have a page or so up this month. We are doing 6 box pages.

Static and Son

I wish I knew more about the program. I think it is a little too unfriendly with set up. It almost makes me want to do everything myself under Publisher. I am only still plugging along because I have seen some nice work completed with it.

Still working on this. The cover is kinda of what he wanted. Still needs to be tweaked a little.

Kids Comic Book Cover

Also he is an image of his kid that he made on CoH. So we could get some city shots.

Tyler - Kid from Comic Book

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Thank you Iltat!

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/signed

White_Mouse,

Oh wow. I am hoping I made it in the 10 count. My luck would mean I didn't. But giving it a try.

StaticThunder

Sorry and thanks. I guess I should have read the whole post since it was full.

Good luck and I can't wait to see those lucky 10. I don't feel so bad since TA didn't get on the list either.

Awesome use of the 'heroes'.

OK. Got the install codes resent to me. We are working on it now. Anyone have tips? And also how do you post a completed comic to the forums?

OK. So having a problem launching the Comic Book Creator. I had to copy the folders from the old hard drive after the major meltdown and now the application file won't launch. Any suggestions?

Ok. Where are the critiques? School is almost out and he needs a summer project to keep himself busy.



Static & Son

X-Force Life
1. Ice.E 2. Spike 3. Speed 4. Stretch 5. Flame 6. Shape 7. Strength 8. Tackle
9. Fangs 10. W.W 11. Spark 12. Smart Guy

Those are the name of the legendary heroes!

Tyler said 5 up! He turned into Flame! He busted into the burning apartment. He came out of the apartment with 30 fainted adults and 5 kids fainted as well. He ran over to his cousin Stevie and his grandpa Pa. They said look over at the town aquarium. Another incident? 3 up! He raced to the town aquarium. He shot through the aquarium doors! 10 up! He told everyone to get behind him and then he absorbed the water then he told everyone to get out of the aquarium. Just when the last person came out a giant wave roared over W.W but lucky him he absorbed the wave. Stevie and Pa came running to Tyler. How about you take a break at the art museum? Tyler loved art. When he got to the art museum the police were there “Trouble” thought Tyler. 3 up! He bulleted through the police. Once he was in the museum he said 6 up! He turned into Shape so he could turn into a painting. He tried to find his favorite painting by Leonardo De Vinci, but he couldn’t find it. “Stolen” growled Tyler. He remembered the painting and turned into the painting! Since he was a painting he could not move. He heard footsteps approaching. He felt himself get picked up and thrown in a bag. He also heard a voice say “That’s the last of ‘em.” Next thing you know you’re at their hideout. You get thrown with the other paintings carelessly. Tyler said 7 up! And went through the whole hideout and knocked everyone out. After that he returned to where all the paintings were and said 3 up! He pushed all the paintings carefully 1 by 1 back to the correct place in the museum. After that he walked home to have a good nights sleep. When he woke up Stevie was above him yelling “Jewelry robbery!” Tyler jumped up and yelled 1 up! He ran out of the house and then ran to the jewelry shop. Once he was in he did a mega-ice blast. He found the crook and said 5 up! He blasted a fire-ball at his bag, opened it up and got the jewelry. He put it in a frozen cops hand then ran back home. The next day Stevie told Tyler to check out the power plant because something is wrong with the town electricity. 11 up! said Tyler. Since he was electricity it was easy to teleport from place to place as long as there is electricity. Just then he teleported from the house to the town power plant. He looked around “Lectrick” growled Spark. “Lectrick” is Spark’s arch enemy. Just then he heard some cackling and around the corridor. “Lectrick” thought Spark. 7 up! whispered Tyler. He tip toed over to where he heard the cackling and blew a punch at that very spot. He hit Lectrick. BOOM! Lectrick crashed to the back of the store. “Ahhhhhh” yelled Lectrick! Strength ran to Lectrick and gave him a super-punch right in his stomach. Lectrick fell to the floor, 3 up! said Tyler. He went as fast as he could to try to get to the police before Lectrick woke up. As soon as he got there he turned into Tyler and said “Lectrick is at the power plant.” The police thanked him and then they hurried to the power plant. “I better follow them just in case” thought Tyler. But half of him said not to follow them. “I’ll let a superhero settle this” said Tyler. 12 up! said Tyler. Smart Guy will think this through said Tyler. Smart Guy thought and thought and finally decided to follow them. 11 up! said Tyler and then he teleported to the power plant. 3 up! said Tyler and since he is super fast he can listen very closely. He listened and listened but didn’t hear anything. As he was leaving he heard someone say “You’ll never get me!” Since he heard that he said 4 up!. he opened the door and closed it. Lectrick sprang up. “Uh oh” said Letrick. Stretch stretched his arm out and wrapped it around Lectrick. “Ha, ha” said Lectrick. “You forgot I can electricity you.” “Nope” said Stretch. “Watch me” said Lectrick. Just then he blasted electricity at Stretch. “I’m made of rubber which doesn’t conduct electricity, remember?” Double uh oh said Lectrick. Stretch pulled him toward himself. When he was in front of him, he said 11 up! and teleported into a police cell. “Bye, bye” said Spark. “Noooooo” yelled Lectrick. As soon as he got home Pa said “The zoo, the zoo!” 3 up! said Tyler. He bolted to the zoo. 8 up! said Tyler. He ambled cautiously through the zoo. He heard a movement behind him. “Ahhhhh” yelled Tackle as he flew through the air. “What hit me?” said Tackle in a dazed tone. “I did” said a voice that seemed very far away. He looked behind him. “Trollo” said Tackle. “Yep” he said. “I used my Rhino.” “Rhino?” Tackle said in a questioning tone. “I’m taking over the breed rhinos and walruses’.” Tyler thought he would want to control Tackle and Fangs as well. Just then he tackled Trollo. “Ahhhh” he yelled as he got thrown across the room. Now’s my chance to escape Tackle thought. 3 up! Tyler said. He raced around the whole building and finally found an exit. When he came out of the skyscraper he was at the zoo! “Strange” said Tyler. “Arff, arff” someone said. “Uh oh” said Tyler. He quickly went to his right then to his left and said 3 up! He raced in circles around the thing that said “Arff, arff.” When Speed stopped he found that it was a walrus. It looked dead. Tyler said 8 up! he poked the walrus.
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Please be kind and keep in mind, an 8 year old wrote this.

All comments will be helpful.

Thanks

Static & Son

quote: When he got to the art museum the police were there “Trouble” thought Tyler


That was his reason.

Now that this is typed I will be working with him to put it together. I think I will -push- the comic book style as he has done very short scenes.

I have downloaded the Comic Book Creator and am working on some city screen shots in CoH now. We have made him a toon called the 'Kid' and are trying to get all the images.

I think I will start with some basic 6 box comic pages and add content as we find it.

With this being the intro issue I think you will see all the characters and some of their enemies.

Keep the comments coming please.

OK. Here we go. A little bit of the story. It is still being typed (possibly edited for grammer). But here is a uncut beginning. The rest will be coming. Should I do it as a link or just typed in this?

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X-Force Life

1. Ice.E 2. Spike 3. Speed 4. Stretch 5. Flame 6. Shape 7. Strength 8. Tackle 9. Fangs
10. W.W 11. Spark 12. Smart Guy

Those are the name of the legendary heroes!

Tyler said 5 up! He turned into Flame! He busted into the burning apartment. He came out of the apartment with 30 fainted adults and 5 kids fainted as well. He ran over to his cousin Stevie and his grandpa Pa. They said look over at the town aquarium. Another incident? 3 up! He raced to the town aquarium. He shot through the aquarium doors! 10 up! He told everyone to get behind him and then he absorbed the water then he told everyone to get out of the aquarium. Just when the last person came out a giant wave roared over W.W but lucky him he absorbed the wave. Stevie and Pa came running to Tyler. How about you take a break at the art museum? Tyler loved art. When he got to the art museum the police were there “Trouble” thought Tyler. 3 up! He bulleted through the police. Once he was in the museum he said 6 up! He turned into Shape so he could turn into a painting. He tried to find his favorite painting by Leonardo De Vinci, but he couldn’t find it. “Stolen” growled Tyler. He remembered the painting and turned into the painting! Since he was a painting he could not move. He heard footsteps approaching. He felt himself get picked up and thrown in a bag. He also heard a voice say “That’s the last of ‘em.”

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Please be nice with any initial critiques (I wouldn't expect anything else from this community) and remember this is from the mind of an 8 year old.

Static and Son

So when you say a 2-step one gives approx 50%. Is this more effective than having a SO? So like a HammiO with damage/acc is that equal to 1-Dam SO and 1-Acc SO?

Thanks for the guide. It will help me so much.

Working right now. Will try to have at least a page of his story up this week.

Static and Son

Far,

That looks really nice. The kid loves it when they are cartoon kinda style. Thanks.

Static.

update: Computer has been reloaded and now just trying to get things back in order. Most important was reloading 4hrs of CoH downloads.

OK all.

What a horrible week. Well the good news first, the science fair was a blast.

Bad news. Keyboard crashed. Bad port.
Bader news. Power supply went up.
Baddest news. Motherboard went as well.

Best news. Just bought a new computer and need to reinstall all.

Will try to finish soon unless I get fired as I have not sent in any work since it is on the crashed computers hard drive. Oh, well. I will work it all out

Yipee!

Tomorrow is the science fair. We will be back to this next week.

Static and Son

Didn't want to loose this.

Still trying on our end. Getting the Science Fair project completed this week.

Gill, any luck with the other sketch?

Thanks

Static & Son

Trying not to get lost.

I was sorry to hear CB was taking a break.

Spring break was great. We are trying to catch up and hope to get some more done here. The boys have a science fair project due in 2 weeks so that is first priority.

Static

Still going strong guys.

We are heading out for the next 14days for our Spring Break. When we get back the kid should have at least a page ready to post.

Have a great time all.

Static and son

GB.

I have seen the piece for Celtic Bolt and boy that was nice. I know you are pretty busy and getting paid always comes before charity. Thanks again for the nice work and the contribution you give.

Static & Son

Cool.

Here is one that I ended up coloring in crayon. Still trying to load up the ones the kid has colored.

Fangs & Spark in Crayon

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and again why is'nt this on a saturday morning cartoon?????


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I guess we can add that to the list. We would probably need to have an artist on staff (--->points at you GB).

So the list is:

1. Comic Book
2. Story Book
3. Saturday Morning Cartoon

Boy, we have our work cut out for us.