((I know its suppose to be 500 words min but this is all i have..))
Surgeon
Betty Walks into her Father house in kings row that smelled of beer and drugs "Hi! i'm home!," a voice in the backround yells out,"Good get me a beer.., make it three!," "you realy shoudn't be drinking these anymore you know.." "Did i ask you if i shoud or shoud not be drinking...huh..? no i didn't okay and harry up with them to! shheszz what does a person have to do to get a drink around here huh?" Betty hands the beers to your father,"here they are...". "Hand me my smokes," "No I will not hand you your 'smokes' , you shoudn't be drinking at the firsts place!" "Give them to me you girl," Betty took out his last "smoke" and riped it in half , "Hey! what did you do that for?!, next time you do that i'll..i'll...i'll put you on punishment!," "you can't put me on punishment old man! you don't take care of me a matter of fact..I take care of you!," yea yea yea whatever..," "Your lucky your my father... if you weren't i whoud of brought you to the police office a long.. time ago.," " What these are just ciggs..you can't bring me in for that!," Oh? so Ricky at the Corner sells Ciggurates now huh?," "... ... give me a break your just like your mother why won't you visit her and not me?huh,"Well if it makes you happy i just left from her place.." Betty turn around to see her dad was alrdy passed out,"stupid old man" Betty went up stairs to her fathers bed((which was the cleanist part of his place)) to take a nap befor she headed out to fight some crime , but when she got there the closet light was on so she went to turn it off but befor she had the chance to turn it off there was a picture... a black and white picture of her father thou skinny and younger but it was him and he had a Surgeon suit on, no way she thought in her head but befor she could deny it, a rusted old piece of medal drop but the bottom of the picture, whats this she thought to her self but when she blew all the dust off of it she saw that it was some sort of badge... "Surgeon" it had written on it..."No way...," at that second she heard the sceeky sound the couch her father passed on makes, so she put the badge and picture back in the closet quickly and went downstiars."where you going?," Betty ask her father,"I'm going to Rick... .. Jays house up the street," "uuhh huh sure.. dont get caught.. i wont bell out," "yea yea whatever i have a headache stop preaching to me..." as her father walked out the door she smiled at him.
"Amazing that old fool did good in one point of his life.."
