Gravime

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  1. I loved this story! I loved the mix of skepticism, disillusionment and deep idealism. The characters were believable and engaging. The atmosphere of the places emerged and had a character of their own. Great story, I found it truly uplifting. The only character I didn't absolutely believe was the tough-talking-teen-with-a-heart-of-gold, Bobbie Mercado, who seemed a bit too self-possessed for his age.

    "We don't call ourselves the Midnight Rangers because we love to range around at midnight."

    Genius!

    Don't stop writing!